Digimon: Dorulumon's Amazing Adventure

This is too clumsy. The format of the two pieces of "Fight Greymon's Surprise" written four or five times has not changed at all. They are completely copied and pasted five times.

Can't Doromon still evolve into the Dragon Emperor?

Come on digital writing.

Come on! ! !

But pigeon, come on

Come on, look good

It looks good so far, but it would be boring if it ends up competing for the throne in the human world.

Please support me, but the first half is obviously the story of evolution of x. It depends on how it is written later.

Okay, I hope it doesn't suck

Come on, keep writing