[Had/Not Inverse|Deputy CP: Luo He, GGAD]
Naturally flirting without knowing it × being duplicitous but not arrogant.
Harry really felt that he was just making friends, and every sentence "because you are Draco" was as frank as a conversation. Draco's ears were burning, but he still sneered: "Saint Potter."
Until the box was pressed against Harry's heart and whispered day and night, awakening his most dark thoughts. Harry becomes sharp, paranoid, and dangerous, no longer the "Boy Who Lived." Everyone said he had changed.
Only Draco exposed him: "You are just enjoying it. Enjoying being needed, worshiped, and regarded as a savior. Potter, you are pretending from beginning to end."
Every word hits. Harry smiled: Now that he has been seen through, he will stop pretending. Not pretending to be good, not pretending to be nice, not pretending to be a Gryffindor saint, not pretending not to have feelings for his blond nemesis. He grabbed Draco's chin and trapped him against the cold stone wall: "Malfoy, can't you see - I've wanted to do this since the first time I saw you."
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I just started grading, and I was very nervous. I wrote every word of this piece by myself, and I am very emotional. I hope you will leave a few more thoughts after reading it. If it suits your taste, I also hope to get some encouragement - your feedback is my greatest confidence to continue writing. See you in the comments section.
Reader comments
The more I read, the more I get hooked. The key is that the writing is online and the atmosphere is full. As I read, I felt like I was standing in the corridor of Hogwarts. It's full of details and has a lot of laughs. I don't know what the author was thinking. The characters are all vividly drawn. Ron and Hermione are not just backgrounds, they all have characters... You can go straight to it.
One more thing, I like Theodore the most right now. Although he doesn't appear in many scenes, he is really cool!
Full marks first as a courtesy
The most striking thing about this article is that there is no system or big cheats. It is very comfortable to read when you open it up before you start. Moreover, the author put in many details and many different things. Whether it is Harry or other characters, I immediately stood up.
I like Harry's character very much, especially the part where he teases Malfoy. He has a fun-loving temperament, but I always feel that there is something hidden behind him. That feeling of being able to disguise himself is always there. The more I like him now, the more worried I am about whether there will be a reversal later.
But what stood out to me the most was the young master. He was smart, excellent, talented, and not stupid. This is what a noble young master should be like. The author completely created my ideal Draco Malfoy.
Anyway, come on, author, I will keep following you.
Nice! Although some personal settings have been added to the characters of the two protagonists, they are not OOC. Although they are in love, there is no crazy and disrespectful behavior for the sake of love. The two protagonists are working hard to become stronger, and they have put in their own efforts, not relying on cheats to make fun of fish that even a dog can do.
After seeing the part about going to the cellar late at night to find Draco, I couldn't help but write a review.
The Harry in this article appeals to me so much. He is not a bitter savior with deep hatred, nor is he silly and sweet. He is the kind of person who talks lightly but has a clear heart.
Draco is also written in a very likable way, and the author does not label him as a "tsundere" - his pride is real, and so is his strength. When he took the diary away from Harry in the secret room, to be honest, I was more stunned than Harry!
I was so good at calling out the emotional lines, but Harry was frighteningly frank. He put his hands on the other person's waist, buried his face in the waist and abdomen, smelled the green apple smell on the other person's collar, and then asked sincerely: "What's wrong with smelling it between friends?"
But my heart has exploded. When a person does what anyone would do in the name of a friend, the word itself has long been hollowed out, okay?
Harry didn't realize it yet. Draco probably realized it, but he didn't dare say it.
The original jokes are comfortable to use and not forced. Where you should laugh, you will laugh to death, and where you should cut, you will be right (Filch's part was really unexpected). The only shortcoming is that it is too short. I accidentally tied it. I hope the author will update it more and not give up. I will give you five-star praise and recommend it.
I really like this article, hope you know it. The author's character creation is very good in this article. It is straight-forward and arrogant. The emotional line is slow and the plot is smoothly connected. There are no flowery words and it is very comfortable to read. [Make faces]
Very very very beautiful
The delicious setting is very beautiful and the characters are delicious [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Wc is so delicious, this is the most delicious of all the Hades I have ever seen
This is the best Hadwin I've ever seen, bar none.
It's not industrial saccharine at all. The two of them never said a word about their love from the beginning to the end, but every moment of the tug-of-war made people unable to sit still.
"You care about me?" "Yes, I care about you."
It's this kind of thing, with its mouth full of thorns and its body full of answers.
The author is so good at writing, it's addictive, and in the latest article, Draco thought Harry's wand would repel him, but it didn't. A wand that recognized its owner acknowledged it first for its owner.
The author didn't even bother to write a confession and let the wand do it for him.
It's so good. I really like it. I really like it.
I really, really like this rhythm.
Following Da Da's words, I seemed to have fallen in love with Harry and Draco again. I was very moved, so cheers Da Da.
The more I read, the more I get hooked. The key is that the writing is online and the atmosphere is full. As I read, I felt like I was standing in the corridor of Hogwarts. It's full of details and has a lot of laughs. I don't know what the author was thinking. The characters are all vividly drawn. Ron and Hermione are not just backgrounds, they all have characters... You can go straight to it. One more thing, I like Theodore the most right now. Although he doesn't appear in many scenes, he is really cool!
Full marks first as a courtesy The most striking thing about this article is that there is no system or big cheats. It is very comfortable to read when you open it up before you start. Moreover, the author put in many details and many different things. Whether it is Harry or other characters, I immediately stood up. I like Harry's character very much, especially the part where he teases Malfoy. He has a fun-loving temperament, but I always feel that there is something hidden behind him. That feeling of being able to disguise himself is always there. The more I like him now, the more worried I am about whether there will be a reversal later. But what stood out to me the most was the young master. He was smart, excellent, talented, and not stupid. This is what a noble young master should be like. The author completely created my ideal Draco Malfoy. Anyway, come on, author, I will keep following you.
Nice! Although some personal settings have been added to the characters of the two protagonists, they are not OOC. Although they are in love, there is no crazy and disrespectful behavior for the sake of love. The two protagonists are working hard to become stronger, and they have put in their own efforts, not relying on cheats to make fun of fish that even a dog can do.
After seeing the part about going to the cellar late at night to find Draco, I couldn't help but write a review. The Harry in this article appeals to me so much. He is not a bitter savior with deep hatred, nor is he silly and sweet. He is the kind of person who talks lightly but has a clear heart. Draco is also written in a very likable way, and the author does not label him as a "tsundere" - his pride is real, and so is his strength. When he took the diary away from Harry in the secret room, to be honest, I was more stunned than Harry! I was so good at calling out the emotional lines, but Harry was frighteningly frank. He put his hands on the other person's waist, buried his face in the waist and abdomen, smelled the green apple smell on the other person's collar, and then asked sincerely: "What's wrong with smelling it between friends?" But my heart has exploded. When a person does what anyone would do in the name of a friend, the word itself has long been hollowed out, okay? Harry didn't realize it yet. Draco probably realized it, but he didn't dare say it. The original jokes are comfortable to use and not forced. Where you should laugh, you will laugh to death, and where you should cut, you will be right (Filch's part was really unexpected). The only shortcoming is that it is too short. I accidentally tied it. I hope the author will update it more and not give up. I will give you five-star praise and recommend it.
I really like this article, hope you know it. The author's character creation is very good in this article. It is straight-forward and arrogant. The emotional line is slow and the plot is smoothly connected. There are no flowery words and it is very comfortable to read. [Make faces]
Very very very beautiful
The delicious setting is very beautiful and the characters are delicious [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Wc is so delicious, this is the most delicious of all the Hades I have ever seen
This is the best Hadwin I've ever seen, bar none. It's not industrial saccharine at all. The two of them never said a word about their love from the beginning to the end, but every moment of the tug-of-war made people unable to sit still. "You care about me?" "Yes, I care about you." It's this kind of thing, with its mouth full of thorns and its body full of answers. The author is so good at writing, it's addictive, and in the latest article, Draco thought Harry's wand would repel him, but it didn't. A wand that recognized its owner acknowledged it first for its owner. The author didn't even bother to write a confession and let the wand do it for him. It's so good. I really like it. I really like it. I really, really like this rhythm. Following Da Da's words, I seemed to have fallen in love with Harry and Draco again. I was very moved, so cheers Da Da.
Not bad, looking forward to the follow-up plot