Cultivation: From Refining Dharma Seeds to Supreme Thunder Arts

The quality is good, the writing is okay, and it should be on the list starting from the beginning. However, it is recommended to modify the introduction. The introduction is too long and cannot grasp the key points at first glance. In addition, according to some descriptions, it feels like AI may be used. One of my judgments is based on a common problem of some AIs: within a very short context, the name of the same character or item changes frequently. But if AI is really used, it can only be said that the current level of AI is really high, or the author has trained it better, and it will have little impact on reading.

You can take a look at Food and Grass, Shuhuang. The protagonist can go to other worlds, earn the price difference of items, and improve himself. Mainly because of the family plot, which discouraged people from quitting. The Foundation Establishment Pill was robbed, registration was blocked, and the protagonist was reported to be a demon. The motivations of the characters are inexplicable. At the beginning, they were grabbing Foundation Establishment Pills and investing in people with more talent without compensation. It could be said that the family members were not handling things well. But later on, when the protagonist showed his talent, he continued to target him and reported him as a demon. Wouldn't the rest of the family be affected?

A little development in the middle period must teach the family a lesson. If it doesn't avenge the first chapter, it will be meaningless. Completely wipe out the grandfather of this family and the relevant personnel, and don't let it go lightly. A person who does not hold grudges is also an ungrateful person

The immortal version has an inverted hook between the two worlds, but the plot will not be cliché and the two worlds will not be constantly involved. The writing is delicate and the plot is smooth. It is worth watching and it is good to praise. The main world has been fully developed and developed. It mainly embezzles the outside world. This is also rare. He was not born in the slums. The plot of the road to battle will not stop fighting and remain unknown because of the golden finger that travels between the two worlds. Instead, it will strive to reach the top like a springboard, and the thunder will move.

It's a good story about cultivating immortals. Although it is a classic story about parents passing away and being destitute and having a good appearance and Qingmei's financial support, the overall world view is still innovative and interesting. It is said to be about cultivating immortals, but I think it is more like a wizard. The main world has strict regulations and training systems for the new generation, and the strong ones are fighting in other worlds. The cultivation and magic system is a bit like cultivating immortals, which personally feels a bit interesting. Generally speaking, it is not a big problem to provide food and grass for cultivating immortals.

A very good book, switching between two worlds, and a very high-level refining golden finger. It can be seen that the author has great ambitions, but the progress of the protagonist's realm is indeed a bit slow, and the economy is a bit collapsed. However, the flaws do not hide the good points, the character of the protagonist and the overall plot are top-notch.

The update is a bit slow, but the system is good. It is a bit like the combination of wizards and immortal cultivators. It also describes the oppression under the patriarchal system. The cousin followed the chickens and dogs to ascend to heaven and ate the resources of the orphans. Then he should have been destroyed along with his grandfather. I will wait for you to write the follow-up.

If you have an idea, it will be difficult in the early stages, and only then will people take notice. At first glance, he was invincible in both worlds, so how could he look at it? Come on

The writing is great. Come on, it's more interesting than many Qidian Sanjiang essays nowadays.

Grandfather grabbed the Foundation Building Pill, blocked the trip to the secret realm, and reported that the protagonist was an extraterrestrial demon. As a result, the protagonist almost became a rogue cultivator, but he couldn't die. It made me think that Zhang Zongling was the protagonist [face covering]