(The rating just came out, but it’s already going up.)
[Pokemon + online game + reborn]
Jiang Hong returned to two days before Pokemon Online launched.
In his previous life, he was a nobody at the bottom of the player base. He didn’t join until a year after launch, spent three years as a complete unknown, then accidentally stumbled into a battlefield of legendary Pokemon and was crushed to death by the shockwaves.
This time, he had returned with three years’ worth of memories and the coordinates of every hidden opportunity in the game.
On launch day, everyone else was scrambling over a single Caterpie.
He went straight for the rare identity of Pokemon Research Intern.
With Individual Values vision, he was the only person in the game who could see a Pokemon’s potential.
Pikachu were as common as stray dogs, but once he obtained a special item, the Light Ball, their physical and special attack soared.
Hidden quests, rare Pokemon, first clears of achievements, special abilities... He knew every secret in this world.
But he also knew that, later on, the game would merge with the real world, and no one knew who had released it.
When the game and reality finally converged, the memories of his previous life would be his only means of survival.
I gave it five stars, but I didn't say this book was particularly good, just because the author has to eat.
A very ancient online game novel. I have just read Chapter 4. I will point out the poisonous points for you.
The first is the issue of profession. Basically, a real online game player will not discriminate against any profession in the early stage of the game. For you, if possible, please change it.
Then there is the catching of the big needle, level 11 attack, the best big needle with full speed, and the size is a bit larger than other similar ones, and how can it be easily avoided with skills? You can say that Charmander barely defeated him when he was disabled, but you gave him a single brush at full state. To be honest, when it comes to the commanding ability of the protagonist, I really don't think it is anything. Your combat writing is really very average.
To sum up a brainless novice's cool article, it's cool for the sake of being happy.
It looks pretty good. The rhythm is similar to when I play the game. It doesn't overwhelm the combat power. The protagonist is quite suitable for Red. There is a big problem in terms of being less talkative, but it is reasonable. I can't feel the bond between the protagonist and the elves. It is reasonable because this is just a game.
I watched an online rebirth game with two male protagonists at Hongguo. One time traveled and the other was reborn. The person who time-traveled did not pass through the previous life. He died before the server started. This life was saved by the reborn person. If you are substituted into Pokémon Online, the second male character will be reincarnated and know the hidden mission, and the first male character will travel through time and know all the Pokémon [awkward laugh]
The author, give me a little suggestion or a little easter egg. When the protagonist wins the first championship in the entire server, an achievement will be given to reward the first person to win the championship with a unique title: First Crown Legend, or First Generation Champion, etc. Or arrange a red unique title: Fighter, and automatically play the exclusive BGM when fighting the protagonist [laughing]
Oh my God, there is also the plot of the insect-catching boy. Is there a setting where the life span of the insect type is short? In the later stage, you have to grab the insect slate, which is in the original insect-catching boy Sakaki. It would be great if there was a heterochromatic green caterpillar that could hide and evolve into Rayquaza
Very good article, although the pace is a bit fast but it reads smoothly
The subject matter is relatively rare, but it looks good and nice.
Don't the players know the plot?
Not bad, not bad. It's still very appetizing. It's fast-paced and basically not toxic. You can give it a try.
I gave it five stars, but I didn't say this book was particularly good, just because the author has to eat. A very ancient online game novel. I have just read Chapter 4. I will point out the poisonous points for you. The first is the issue of profession. Basically, a real online game player will not discriminate against any profession in the early stage of the game. For you, if possible, please change it. Then there is the catching of the big needle, level 11 attack, the best big needle with full speed, and the size is a bit larger than other similar ones, and how can it be easily avoided with skills? You can say that Charmander barely defeated him when he was disabled, but you gave him a single brush at full state. To be honest, when it comes to the commanding ability of the protagonist, I really don't think it is anything. Your combat writing is really very average. To sum up a brainless novice's cool article, it's cool for the sake of being happy.
It looks pretty good. The rhythm is similar to when I play the game. It doesn't overwhelm the combat power. The protagonist is quite suitable for Red. There is a big problem in terms of being less talkative, but it is reasonable. I can't feel the bond between the protagonist and the elves. It is reasonable because this is just a game.
I watched an online rebirth game with two male protagonists at Hongguo. One time traveled and the other was reborn. The person who time-traveled did not pass through the previous life. He died before the server started. This life was saved by the reborn person. If you are substituted into Pokémon Online, the second male character will be reincarnated and know the hidden mission, and the first male character will travel through time and know all the Pokémon [awkward laugh]
The author, give me a little suggestion or a little easter egg. When the protagonist wins the first championship in the entire server, an achievement will be given to reward the first person to win the championship with a unique title: First Crown Legend, or First Generation Champion, etc. Or arrange a red unique title: Fighter, and automatically play the exclusive BGM when fighting the protagonist [laughing]
Oh my God, there is also the plot of the insect-catching boy. Is there a setting where the life span of the insect type is short? In the later stage, you have to grab the insect slate, which is in the original insect-catching boy Sakaki. It would be great if there was a heterochromatic green caterpillar that could hide and evolve into Rayquaza
Very good article, although the pace is a bit fast but it reads smoothly
The subject matter is relatively rare, but it looks good and nice.
Don't the players know the plot?
Not bad, not bad. It's still very appetizing. It's fast-paced and basically not toxic. You can give it a try.
Good-looking and compact plot