Floating Life and Broken Shadow: I Have Traveled Through Thousands of Lives

"Hello fellow book lovers! A new book by a newbie has just been released. Reading it over and over again can lead to blind spots in your thinking. I especially want to hear your most intuitive feelings: Plot rhythm: Did you feel any part was dragging or too fast? Characterization: Is the protagonist likable? Are the supporting characters three-dimensional enough? Logical loopholes: Is there anything that is misleading or unclear? Everyone is welcome to speak freely, no matter how hard it is, you can slap it hard!