Reborn Tang Wulin in Douluo Continent III

As the author of this book, I am still new to writing. I carefully polished the angle and concept of the story, but I know that my writing is average. Whether it is writing, plot, description of the environment, fighting scenes, or dialogue, I still have a lot of room for improvement. But I really love it, and this is the only way I can earn income. I also know that there is still a lot to improve. All book lovers are welcome to read. If you have any thoughts or suggestions, you can write them in the comment area. No matter what they are, your comments are welcome. I will read every feedback carefully and will continue to write well. Thank you everyone, I really appreciate everyone who supports me, thank you everyone.

The angle is quite novel and I like it very much, but the details and connection need to be dealt with. The six people you wrote directly in the beginning of Class Zero turned into five people at the Ascension Platform. There is also a machine that measures mental power in the original work. I remember that it should be a helmet. Anyway, it is not measured on the machine by hand. I suggest the author record the differences from the original work to avoid making mistakes later. If there is a private design, it is recommended to mark it. As for CP, I'm even more interested in Lin Yue and Gu Yue's Moon. I was relieved to see that the author didn't mean anything, and I finally found an article that didn't incorporate the heroine and only had Gu Yue. Overall, it's worth a read. I look forward to the author writing better and better in the future.

Full marks, absolutely amazing. There are already very few Dou San Tong humanities. Those that can restore the character's personality and emotions so realistically are almost extinct in Tomato. The writing is also very good. I hope I won't be sanctioned by heaven, and I hope Linyue can sprinkle more sugar.

The writing is very nice [Admiration] The author's writing style is very interesting [laughing] I really like reading it, I hope you won't stop updating it [Sending my heart] And DaDa is very good and will reply to everyone's comments [Blowing kisses] The plot changes are not big, and the important plots that should be there are still there [laughing] It's very interesting and novel 😘

The author may be a newcomer, the plot connection is a bit stiff and the plot logic outline is not particularly clear, but the novelty of the angle article is still enough. Four stars, come on, author

Teacher, teacher, is this book an official version? According to the direction arrow of Dou San in the early stage, it is more like that of Yan Yan and Le Ye

They have said everything that needs to be said. I will just say, boss NB!!!

Come on, the author is looking forward to updating his works 👍👍👍

It makes up for my great regret! I am really happy to read this book in my senior year of high school. Come on, author! More Linyue CP, this is what I'm most looking forward to!

Woohoo, author, you must keep writing. A good cook can eat food when he opens his mouth. You must be the master of dream fulfillment😢😢