[The Male Lead Can Transform into a Monster] + [Mecha Elements] + [One Heroine] + [The Heroine Has Maxed-Out Piloting Talent]
(The rating starts high and will rise! The protagonist isn't invincible from the start; he has room to grow. The book also keeps up a fast pace and delivers the action, with fights appearing every few chapters. I'm not great at writing blurbs, but read the first five chapters and you'll see how good it is!)
"Demon Hunter Mecha has arrived on the battlefield. Beginning the mission to hunt down the giant beast!"
A roar rang across the sea as a black mecha surged through the waves, forming a blade of light in its raised hand and bringing it down hard on the gigantic dragon-like beast.
The beast's dark green blood gushed into the sea, and waves of steam rose from the water in an instant.
It struck back in a rage, landing a powerful punch squarely on the Demon Hunter's core.
The massive mecha instantly lost its balance and crashed heavily onto the sea.
"Mecha damage! Mecha damage! Warning! Water entering the negative-pressure cabin!"
Shrill alarms flashed across the screen without pause.
Chen Mingxuan simply took off his neural-link helmet and shut down the cabin's life-sign synchronization system. His cold gaze fixed on the approaching beast.
"You want to play? I'm game."
A jet-black beam of light suddenly stretched across the entire sea, and a hulking monster covered in rock-textured scales appeared out of thin air.
Its enormous palm came crashing down, smashing the enemy's head clean off.
The battle was over in an instant.
Standing on the shoulder of the Demon Hunter mecha, Chen Mingxuan watched the rescue helicopters hurrying over in the distance, then looked at the huge beast's corpse floating on the sea. He let out a helpless laugh.
"And nobody told me I'd have to learn to pilot a mecha just to fight monsters?"
AI article, but some paragraphs were manually deleted, so it looks intermittent and the pace is too fast. However, Tomato recently updated the perfect attendance award, which can only be said to be acceptable.
The pace was a bit fast for me, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists was also a bit too fast. There was no plot buffer, so I fell in love with it. But it still looks pretty good to me. Also, can the author add a few more chapters 🤔 There are also shortcomings: the details are not handled well. For example, the code name of the monster is basically determined in one sentence, and it is not explained clearly. And the description of the protagonist is a bit inconsistent. It's okay if you don't mind it
The writing is good, and all aspects are quite good. I hope the author will slow down the pace a bit. I have read articles with a faster pace that don't have many words. But, if there are other big events after this paragraph is finished, don't worry about the pace being too fast.
It's not too much for me to give myself a good review. No one will read it anyway, but I will still write a long version of this book 😘
I don't want to say anything more, just update it quickly. I want to know what the ending is. I'm addicted to watching it, but I have to rush for an update 🤦
The overall concept and ideas are pretty good, but I personally feel that the only shortcoming is that the character design has become a bit shabby in its transformation and growth. It's not like writing a novel but like writing a script, allowing the actors to quickly understand the characters, rather than letting the readers follow the characters' experiences step by step.
This book is really good, and the author will answer questions patiently, but it mainly depends on personal taste. I personally like Pacific Rim very much, so I will like this.
The subject matter is quite good, but the logic in it is a bit fragmented. It feels so strange. I'm out of books, so I'll give it a read. I'll support it with five stars.
Holy book, very beautiful
I don't care whether your writing is good or not, whether it's AI or not, whether you run away or not, and if it's constantly updated, I'll give it five stars.