This is the author's first book. If there's anything you don't like, feel free to tag me or leave a comment below. I'll read every single one.
(One heroine + no System + invincible in the later stages + no angst)
“I spotted three problems as soon as I got here.”
Xia Te looked at the author before him, disdain in his eyes.
“I've only read the first dozen chapters, and I spend more than half the time getting beaten up. Aren't I the protagonist? And why is the pacing so rushed?”
The author calmly replied to Xia Te.
“It's all in service of the plot. I want to get to the main storyline as quickly as possible, so there's no helping it. And the only way for you to grow quickly is to take a beating. As the old saying goes, ‘Practice makes perfect.’”
“...Fine, I'll let that one go for now. Second problem: what do you mean, Shasla, the elite monster in my beginner village? Was I even supposed to be able to beat that thing at that point?”
“Hey, you're only looking at the surface.”
The author took a sip of tea.
“We already established that getting beaten up is the best way for you to grow quickly, so it only makes sense to give you a stronger boss. Right? And it also helps introduce the concept of parallel universes.”
“...Fine. Last question: why is my sister...”
“That's enough, you have way too many questions! I'm in a hurry to go play games, not write. Sit, sit, sit, sit, sit down!”
Xia Te: “I'm starving!”
It's pretty cool, a bit like the animated version of Spider-Man
Super nice. The characters are well drawn.
It looks good, it does look good, but updates are too slow.
Good topic, support it
Look at me... I feel so good~(ᗜᴗᗜ)
Come on, you have the potential to become a great writer, so don't stop updating it (I've seen many books with zero updates [plus one on the bookshelf])
Writing more is not enough