Introduction: Chen Feng traveled back in time to 1956. He was fourteen years old and was so thin that his hands were handicapped. The Jia family next door kept an eye on the three west wing rooms of his house every day. Just when he was feeling aggrieved, a white light exploded in his mind, and a sweet fountain emerged from under his palm. He wiped the corners of his mouth - it was time to settle the accounts in this yard slowly. (58 Words)
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In the first chapter, the protagonist is already pretending to be invincible. He slaps a child every time. How will the plot of the courtyard unfold next?
In the second chapter, he said at the beginning that he would take his brother to the supermarket for a few laps. Were there supermarkets in 1956?
Therefore, giving three 🌟 is already unconscionable.
"Let go!"
Chen Feng leaned the car against the wall, "Watch the car and protect your sister."
"Yes, brother!"
The younger brother quickly tightened his grip on the handlebars.
He stepped over in two steps, but his cell phone vibrated in his trouser pocket without taking it out.
Hua Youlin's pupils lit up for a moment, and she bit her lower lip again.
"Chen Feng?"
It's good, but it's not rigorous enough. There were mobile phones in the 1950s.
In the first chapter, the protagonist is already pretending to be invincible. He slaps a child every time. How will the plot of the courtyard unfold next? In the second chapter, he said at the beginning that he would take his brother to the supermarket for a few laps. Were there supermarkets in 1956? Therefore, giving three 🌟 is already unconscionable.
"Let go!" Chen Feng leaned the car against the wall, "Watch the car and protect your sister." "Yes, brother!" The younger brother quickly tightened his grip on the handlebars. He stepped over in two steps, but his cell phone vibrated in his trouser pocket without taking it out. Hua Youlin's pupils lit up for a moment, and she bit her lower lip again. "Chen Feng?"
It's good, but it's not rigorous enough. There were mobile phones in the 1950s.
Not bad, not bad ((*^∀^))👍🏻
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