Strange Tales of Rules: the Prelude to Du Fengqiu

[It took several hours and I have read it seriously to Chapter 20] [I am Shen Nong, the inspirational romance novel is produced in all Tomatoes] First, talk about content. The lack of a [brain storage] is a major flaw of this book. In fact, the genre of rules and weird stories is a track that requires readers' brains. At least not using their brains, but at least using some logical thinking. The beginning of this book gave me a very strange feeling. In fact, the best way to deal with it is to write that the protagonist travels through the book, or into a parallel world. Otherwise, it seems very uncomfortable. Just the simple "can make food, can enter the dormitory, but believes in the rules and does not go to the teacher or outside help" is already a bit ridiculous. Second, talk about logic. The rules are neither complicated nor simple, but they are not very attractive. The first place where the rules are used at the beginning is the canteen. The pace is so fast at the beginning. Why not give something faster in the canteen. The overall logic of the story is basically self-consistent and not too convoluted. Third, talk about character. After 20 chapters, I still can't figure out what kind of person the protagonist is, and I still can't stand up. Four stars are given because the "bracketed text" and the intervention of the author's environment are more important than the story of the work itself.

Hey 😈, I can't give a five-star rating to the book I wrote. It's very beautiful, but there are a lot of typos. This input method is terrible! I'm so angry😡, please take a look😭

Hehe, let me taste it.

I really like it. It's similar to this kind of ghost story, and it looks very interesting. Come on big