Reborn as Left Qianhu, Invincible Even Above the Immortals!

The ruthlessness of Jin Yiwei was not mentioned, and he was bullied by gangsters and was given back money. It was also written about how awesome Jin Yiwei was, but the preface and the follower did not match up.

It's a mess. I'll write an outline in advance next time. I'm confused. Also, the combat power is too low. A great foundation-building demon is actually afraid of poison. Why don't you poison the tree demon? A thousand households, or a forbidden army, can stay out every day without going back to defend the city?

It's so good that I couldn't stop reading it in one sitting. I suggest the author write a series about Chinese Ghost Story. There's nothing left to write about.

I'll give you full marks for the first chapter, and I won't comment on whether it's good or bad in the rest.

Pretty good, keep up the good work

It's better to go to the factory and drill screws.

The subject matter is novel, and combined with previous movies, it feels reminiscent and not tiring.

Very good, good, good

There are new ideas and more details are polished.

It's okay. It's a super-changing novel. It relies too much on cheating.