Chu Yunzhou and Lin Qingyue were originally a couple in distress in the modern apocalypse. Once they traveled through time, they became the unmarried couple of villains in a novel about cultivating immortals. In the original work, this pair of cannon fodders were exterminated because they competed for opportunities with the protagonist group. After the villain hero avenged his wife, he was brutally crushed by the protagonist group.
After reviving their lives, the couple decided: cherish life, stay away from the protagonist, and survive until the finale!
However, fate plays tricks on people. The more they avoid it, the more trouble will come to them. When the crisis came, Chu Yunzhou accidentally awakened the sign-in system——
[Ding! Sign in at the dangerous Broken Soul Cliff and get a 'Nine Transformations Golden Pill']
[Ding! Sign in at the must-go road for the protagonist group and obtain the inheritance of 'Ancient Escape Technique']
[Ding! Sign in at the villain's lair and get three 'Cause and Effect Reversal Talisman']
From then on, the couple's style of painting changed drastically:
Others take risks to seize treasures, but they sign in and find out;
While others are fighting to the death, they secretly observe;
Others love, hate, and hate others, and they spread sugar to torture dogs.
Original protagonist group: "Why do those Taoist couples always take away opportunities before us?"
Villain of the original plot: "Why do these two passers-by look more like villains than me?"
Will of Heaven: "What's going on with these two people? That's not how the script was written!"
While Chu Yunzhou was signing in to upgrade, he doted on his wife unconditionally: "Madam, do you want to live in peace or do you want to cause trouble today?"
Lin Qingyue's smile was as bright as a flower: "Husband, first sign up for the chance to be the protagonist!"
Reader comments
Be careful when writing male videos, aren't they two Taoist lovers? I thought it was a two-protagonist coming-of-age story, but it turned out to be a one-man show for the male protagonist. The system belongs to the male protagonist, and the chance secrets belong to the male protagonist. The male protagonist is always higher in cultivation than the female protagonist. The emotional line is unfamiliar as if the female protagonist is a native. The female protagonist has to ask the male protagonist if she wants to learn something. Is it possible to learn? The all-powerful male protagonist can learn everything. The female protagonist is a supporting stepping stone, and the protagonist is a casual cultivator. The plot line has no sense of being alive. It means signing in carefully, meeting enemies, getting treasures, upgrading, changing places, and repeating the cycle. The whole story has been putting together a puzzle-style cultivating immortality.
The setting is very pleasing, but the writing style is not very good, and the writing is like a running account. It's a male protagonist narrative, so I don't think there's any problem with the male protagonist being the main character, but it's written like a cross talk…the male protagonist seems to be teasing, and the female protagonist seems to be flattering. In fact, to let readers know the whole story, it is not necessarily necessary to rely on dialogue, and the main dialogue is not well written. Many things in the play are narrated through dialogue between the male and female protagonists. The male protagonist says something, and the female protagonist asks or responds. The dialogue between the two is particularly like the cross talk of Deyun Society... I feel that the author is not very good at describing
Also, the male protagonist seems to be quite smart, but it makes people feel quite stupid. He clearly knows that the enemy wants to harm you, and he has already harmed you once before. Harming him once is not enough, and then he framed you again. This is a mortal enemy, right? Then the other party asked the male protagonist to go to a certain place to meet, and the male protagonist actually You went there... And then you were ambushed by the enemy in advance... You were fooled again and again... I really don't understand those people in those novels, who clearly know that the other party has bad intentions and want to harm you, but still go to the appointment, but there is no reversal at all, and they are still ambushed...
Moreover, it is clearly written about the world of cultivation. The male protagonist always hides behind the wardrobe or behind the grass, and those monks who are higher in cultivation than the male protagonist don't even notice... Is the spiritual consciousness just a decoration? Can't you detect the fluctuations of cultivation aura? At any rate, it would be reasonable to give the male protagonist a breath-absorbing charm or a magic weapon that blocks the breath, so that the monks cannot detect the breath. The male protagonist just hid so casually. I was dumbfounded at the time. Does the author not understand the cultivation system?
I was attracted by the setting, but it felt a bit boring watching it.
Be careful when writing male videos, aren't they two Taoist lovers? I thought it was a two-protagonist coming-of-age story, but it turned out to be a one-man show for the male protagonist. The system belongs to the male protagonist, and the chance secrets belong to the male protagonist. The male protagonist is always higher in cultivation than the female protagonist. The emotional line is unfamiliar as if the female protagonist is a native. The female protagonist has to ask the male protagonist if she wants to learn something. Is it possible to learn? The all-powerful male protagonist can learn everything. The female protagonist is a supporting stepping stone, and the protagonist is a casual cultivator. The plot line has no sense of being alive. It means signing in carefully, meeting enemies, getting treasures, upgrading, changing places, and repeating the cycle. The whole story has been putting together a puzzle-style cultivating immortality.
The setting is very pleasing, but the writing style is not very good, and the writing is like a running account. It's a male protagonist narrative, so I don't think there's any problem with the male protagonist being the main character, but it's written like a cross talk…the male protagonist seems to be teasing, and the female protagonist seems to be flattering. In fact, to let readers know the whole story, it is not necessarily necessary to rely on dialogue, and the main dialogue is not well written. Many things in the play are narrated through dialogue between the male and female protagonists. The male protagonist says something, and the female protagonist asks or responds. The dialogue between the two is particularly like the cross talk of Deyun Society... I feel that the author is not very good at describing Also, the male protagonist seems to be quite smart, but it makes people feel quite stupid. He clearly knows that the enemy wants to harm you, and he has already harmed you once before. Harming him once is not enough, and then he framed you again. This is a mortal enemy, right? Then the other party asked the male protagonist to go to a certain place to meet, and the male protagonist actually You went there... And then you were ambushed by the enemy in advance... You were fooled again and again... I really don't understand those people in those novels, who clearly know that the other party has bad intentions and want to harm you, but still go to the appointment, but there is no reversal at all, and they are still ambushed... Moreover, it is clearly written about the world of cultivation. The male protagonist always hides behind the wardrobe or behind the grass, and those monks who are higher in cultivation than the male protagonist don't even notice... Is the spiritual consciousness just a decoration? Can't you detect the fluctuations of cultivation aura? At any rate, it would be reasonable to give the male protagonist a breath-absorbing charm or a magic weapon that blocks the breath, so that the monks cannot detect the breath. The male protagonist just hid so casually. I was dumbfounded at the time. Does the author not understand the cultivation system? I was attracted by the setting, but it felt a bit boring watching it.