Pokémon: I just wanted to open a farm and was confessed to by a super-powerful lady
[Pokémon + Invincible + Daily + heroines Cattleya, Nazi + Farming + System]
Bai Yu Company passed out after working overtime, and when he woke up, he was in the world of Pokémon.
Bai Yu soon discovered... That this world was so different from the anime he watched? Oh, it turns out it was a few years ago, so that's okay.
When Bai Yu was just born, the system awakened, but he found that the system had nothing to do with fighting. Apart from some weird super powers, it only gave him farming skills.
He originally didn't believe in evil and wanted to break into the world of Pokémon. After being beaten by several geniuses, he finally recognized the reality and had no choice but to go home and open a farm, farming and growing.
Hey, Cattleya, look, this is the mega evolution I planted yesterday, and this is the Diamond Princess I planted today.
Believe me, I really grew these from the ground!
What? If you say you discovered the fairy system, that has absolutely nothing to do with me today. You have to ask me tomorrow.
And...
Bai Yu: By the way, Miss Cattleya, didn't you say before that you wanted to join the Union and become the Four Heavenly Kings? Why are you still hanging on my farm and not leaving?
Cattleya: No, I will be wherever the fish is. (Hold Bai Yu's trouser legs and don't let go)
Bai Yu looked at Na Zi who was silent on the side.
Nazi: Look at what I do, my father is the owner of the hotel, and I will live here from now on.
Reader comments
Let me talk about the conclusion first: it can be read, the writing is average, and it is not toxic at the moment.
(To Chapter 45)
The main characters have appeared in the lineup: Gardevoir, Metagross, Shark with Tooth, Ugly Fish, Eevee, and Swampert.
Female protagonist: Cattleya has appeared, but Nazi has not appeared (it is unclear whether it will be changed to a single female protagonist) because until Chapter 45, it looks very much like a single female protagonist.
Objective evaluation:
Time period: before the champions of each region become famous, their strength is around the king level.
Good: It's easier to get in touch with people before they become famous.
Disadvantages: Easily criticized. If you don't compete with them, Ash will be more suitable as a background after setting off.
Starting point: It can be seen that the protagonist has a strong background and has made improvements and preparations.
It's just that the starting point for the initial elf Gardevoir is too high. I wanted to write the protagonist as the red flower. Unfortunately, there is no other genius to be the green leaf, and there will be much less to watch.
Disadvantages: Farm title, but the farm is compressed to the last 27 chapters. This is where novices often make mistakes. The golden finger appears too slowly and does not capture the readership in the first place.
However, the system seems to be only halo-type, and there are no such things as stores and points.
Final suggestions: Deepen and clarify the main line, balance the relationship between the main line and the branch lines, follow the branch lines around the main line, and appropriately weaken the new farm system.
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A new book is on the way, I hope readers will like it.
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Thank you all for reading.
Write more about daily life, but less about daily life
Let me talk about the conclusion first: it can be read, the writing is average, and it is not toxic at the moment. (To Chapter 45) The main characters have appeared in the lineup: Gardevoir, Metagross, Shark with Tooth, Ugly Fish, Eevee, and Swampert. Female protagonist: Cattleya has appeared, but Nazi has not appeared (it is unclear whether it will be changed to a single female protagonist) because until Chapter 45, it looks very much like a single female protagonist. Objective evaluation: Time period: before the champions of each region become famous, their strength is around the king level. Good: It's easier to get in touch with people before they become famous. Disadvantages: Easily criticized. If you don't compete with them, Ash will be more suitable as a background after setting off. Starting point: It can be seen that the protagonist has a strong background and has made improvements and preparations. It's just that the starting point for the initial elf Gardevoir is too high. I wanted to write the protagonist as the red flower. Unfortunately, there is no other genius to be the green leaf, and there will be much less to watch. Disadvantages: Farm title, but the farm is compressed to the last 27 chapters. This is where novices often make mistakes. The golden finger appears too slowly and does not capture the readership in the first place. However, the system seems to be only halo-type, and there are no such things as stores and points. Final suggestions: Deepen and clarify the main line, balance the relationship between the main line and the branch lines, follow the branch lines around the main line, and appropriately weaken the new farm system. Come on [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]
[Salute][Salute][Salute] A new book is on the way, I hope readers will like it. I will read both book reviews and paragraph reviews. Thank you all for reading.
Write more about daily life, but less about daily life
Very beautiful, super beautiful.