Daozu's Time Travel: at the Beginning, He Was Sold to the Refinery to Screw

In the recent book shortage, I read this new routine-themed book twice. The first time I read it, I had a big difficulty reading, and there were many small mistakes. But the author is a newbie, so I can understand even these mistakes. The second time I read it, it was much better. All the big and small mistakes have been corrected. You can see that the author has put a lot of thought into this book. In terms of plot, it's okay, better than most of the AI ​​shit in the bookstore. The character of Daozu has not collapsed yet. Although he has lived for nine thousand years, it still has a fireworks atmosphere sometimes. The other characters need a little more work, and are a bit facial, but for a new author, the characters in the book are quite passable. The game is quite dense, the plot is weak, and the rhythm is well controlled. Currently, only the protagonist's rune-related strengths have been developed, but it is enough for the novice village in the early stage. Overall, there is still a certain gap between the book and the big brother's book, but it is obviously passable for readers who are short of books or trying new methods. I only give five stars to masterpieces. I will give you four stars for this new trumpet. I hope the author will continue to go [cool]

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