Exotic beasts roam the land, while Beast Tamers stand tall in the world. This is an era of Beast Taming, where all beasts vie for supremacy.
Jiang Chen transmigrates here and awakens the Pet Beast Pavilion Master System, taking over a dilapidated little shop.
Opening the pavilion connects it to countless secret realms, where he can awaken dormant bloodlines in pet beasts, repair broken beast souls, cleanse tainted origins, and forge one peerless battle pet after another.
There's no need to risk his life in dangerous wilderness, nor to stake everything on forcibly forming a contract.
One by one, injured and down-on-their-luck pet beasts with buried potential stumble into the Pet Beast Pavilion by chance, and emerge transformed, reborn.
At first, it was just an obscure little shop that no one cared about.
But as one powerful creature after another emerged from the pavilion, the entire Beast Taming world was shaken.
Countless Beast Tamers traveled thousands of miles to beat down its door, paying enormous sums just to obtain the creatures raised inside.
When the demon race launched a full-scale invasion, they froze at the sight of the human race's legendary beasts. But that wasn't all that shocked them. When Jiang Chen stepped out of the Pet Beast Pavilion, nine mythical pet beasts crushed everything in their path.
Although it is a short story, the characters are very good [sneaky laugh] and the plot is okay. It's just that sometimes the addition of some plots is a bit abrupt, but it's not a big problem 🍉
The writing is okay, but I don't know why sometimes I always feel that Jiang Yan is the protagonist.
Although he is an orphan again in this life, Jiang Chen is still very satisfied. I find this sentence very problematic. Literal translation: I think the current situation of being an orphan is very good and suits me. The protagonist is satisfied with the feeling of "not having to play someone else's son", rather than being satisfied with the "dead person". If the text does not break this down, the positive emotion of "satisfaction" will be attributed to the tragic event, which will directly lead to a lot of misunderstandings. The order of emotions is not arranged in the narrative order: after telling the sacrifice of the original protagonist's parents and the original protagonist's suicide → write the protagonist immediately and feel satisfied. The tragic atmosphere was just exaggerated earlier, and the protagonist's positive feelings and emotional disconnect were immediately picked up. The author wanted to create a protagonist who is sober and does not deliberately act tragic, but the word selection and transition of writing were not done well, which is a mistake in polishing the writing. Summary: The story concept is passable, but the sentences are not polished enough, and it is easy to create huge controversy in one sentence. The author made a clear distinction in his heart: the satisfaction is that he does not have to pretend to be his son, but it is not the joy that makes people die. But when I wrote it, I put "satisfaction" directly behind the tragic plot. Write only the conclusion and omit the psychological foreshadowing. Readers of online articles scan quickly and do not take the initiative to figure out the logic hidden in the author's mind. It is easy to read directly as the protagonist is gloating about someone else's misfortune. This is typical of writing only from your own perspective and ignoring the reader's first impression. When readers read a text, they follow the text and intuitively feel it, and they do not take the initiative to help the author fill in his or her inner story.
This is the first time I have seen freshly caught wild pets that have not been trained and are being sold directly, 6
Is there a heroine? Can anyone tell me?
It's okay, for now
Okay, okay, author, keep at it, more updates!!! But the gift will definitely be ෆ⃛(ᶿ̴͈᷇◟̵◞̵˂͈᷆ ფ next time
Personally, I think it's okay. Please support me.
Still pretty good
So far it's okay, let's squat first