When Yukinoshita Yukino appeared in front of the door.
Only then did he confirm that he had actually gone to the comic book world during the two days he was in coma, and had lived in that world for two years.
However, after losing the system and becoming an ordinary person, is he still qualified to be their leading actor?
(Spring Things, Passerby Heroine, Lonely Rock, My Sister, etc.)
Reader comments
Xiaobai, please give me a five-star encouragement. [Chigua] Let me talk about the advantages first: the plot is not procrastinating, and the character of the heroine is well portrayed. The disadvantage is that the dialogue is too bland, just like a human-computer dialogue. Secondly, the connection between the upper and lower sentences is not smooth. It can express more emotions, and the dialogue can also be less serious. The dialogue can have some tone, so that it will not appear so human-machine, and you can also use some expressions before the dialogue.
Xiaobai, please give me a five-star encouragement. [Chigua] Let me talk about the advantages first: the plot is not procrastinating, and the character of the heroine is well portrayed. The disadvantage is that the dialogue is too bland, just like a human-computer dialogue. Secondly, the connection between the upper and lower sentences is not smooth. It can express more emotions, and the dialogue can also be less serious. The dialogue can have some tone, so that it will not appear so human-machine, and you can also use some expressions before the dialogue.
Conversation is like a human machine,
Quite novel.
Good,,,