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The opening ten chapters of this fantasy book on cultivating immortality are very neatly paced, without lengthy and complicated background foreshadowing. The protagonist's starting character is clear, and the dilemma is created in a real three-dimensional way, without any sense of inconsistency or mindless cheating. The training settings such as breathing in and out to build the foundation and introducing Qi into the body are in line with the traditional system of cultivating immortals. The details are exquisite, the training levels are step-by-step, the logical closed loop is complete, and the sense of substitution is strong.
The plot conflicts are cleverly laid out, and the early conflicts over resources and the contempt of others are just right, which not only creates exciting expectations but also lays down long-term foreshadowing. The dialogue between the characters is naturally not stiff, and the descriptions of fighting and training are detailed and appropriate without being filled with empty rhetoric. The overall writing style is calm and solid, the main plot direction is clear, and the subsequent growth line can be clearly seen. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot of the protagonist breaking through the realm and making a comeback.
The opening ten chapters of this fantasy book on cultivating immortality are very neatly paced, without lengthy and complicated background foreshadowing. The protagonist's starting character is clear, and the dilemma is created in a real three-dimensional way, without any sense of inconsistency or mindless cheating. The training settings such as breathing in and out to build the foundation and introducing Qi into the body are in line with the traditional system of cultivating immortals. The details are exquisite, the training levels are step-by-step, the logical closed loop is complete, and the sense of substitution is strong. The plot conflicts are cleverly laid out, and the early conflicts over resources and the contempt of others are just right, which not only creates exciting expectations but also lays down long-term foreshadowing. The dialogue between the characters is naturally not stiff, and the descriptions of fighting and training are detailed and appropriate without being filled with empty rhetoric. The overall writing style is calm and solid, the main plot direction is clear, and the subsequent growth line can be clearly seen. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot of the protagonist breaking through the realm and making a comeback.