Transformation, My Warm Roommate Is a White-Haired Man!

Come on, author. The author does not rely on, the author does not give in, the author does not confuse, the author does not fold, the author admires, the author does not rely on, the author does not give up, the author is the king, and what he writes is the way of calligraphy and the way of the writer. Come back if you are bullied outside. The first layer of the refrigerator has your favorite crayfish and skewers, and the second layer has Coke and Sprite. By the way, I put 4090 in your room, go and play happily! The clan leader has stewed pork ribs tonight, remember to come back to eat." ——Love your patriarch

Overall, it's good. It's just that the sentences are not fluent in some places, and there are some typos, but it's already very good. The number of readers now, well, there are relatively few people on the subject of marriage, so the number of readers is considered medium. Come on, author, I'm still waiting to see the ending [eating melon] [love]

This is the first book review. It's okay. The writing is not that great, but it's still readable. Come on, the author. It would be better if there were more words. Personal suggestion: The transition is a bit stiff. Sometimes you just finish an action and it goes to the next day. It's not a big problem, but it affects the perception a bit. Come on.

The writing is good, but can the relationship between the male and female protagonists be advanced a little faster [Adoration]

Delicious, not poisonous, great

The writing is not bad, it looks good and I love reading it.