Western Fantasy: Avada Lightning Chain from the Start

There are some cool points and some creativity, which is quite interesting. Maybe the first chapter and a half set up the situation a little bit, giving it a bit of a newcomer feel, but the rest is very exciting. Although the pace is not particularly fast, it is decisive like the ancient demon king when it comes to action. I have to praise the cost-free magic that fits the original design of the HP wizard, so I have seen too many HP wizards that require a mana-consuming setting in the past, so I am really happy to see a pure wizard that fits the original setting in this book. I tend to pay more attention to details in this kind of ability setting. I have not seen any discomfort so far. It is not easy for newcomers to write. Good luck, author [plus one on the bookshelf]

It's a cool novel. The protagonist is still very young and takes a maid. It's very western fantasy...

It's a novel that can be read. I don't see any minor problems so far. Except for the lack of talents, the skill pool and safety of other protagonists can be guaranteed. The pets given are also interesting. I feel that it can be more powerful [Salute]

Physical time travel, good reviews He hides his head and shows his tail, dare not use his real name, and will not use his real name when establishing a territory in the future. Also, the price collapse is so severe that you treat gold coins as copper coins.

The creativity is good, but it can be seen that the book is written by a newbie, and it has the meaning of a running account. It should be good to keep writing it down.

It's pretty good and contains a lot of game elements. It just writes too many details about life. Starting from around chapter 50, the writing is too detailed, as if I want to write out all the daily life of the protagonist without making certain generalizations. This mainly depends on personal perception. If you like the sense of substitution, you will prefer this way of writing.

It's a very enjoyable article, but I don't know if there will be any emotional lines. I hope there will be no or only a small amount of description. The character ability setting is very interesting. If the style is maintained, the word count should be above 8 points. Avada, who can cast it at will without any consumption of magic power, can feel very comfortable, but there is no collapse power system, and the protagonist will grow mentally. It is a casual novel with a refreshing feel, without the cliches of clichéd novels and very novel plots and settings.

This type of writing is already very good, the protagonist has a clear logic, and the plot is okay. Well, it's completely watchable.

Very good, the subject matter is good, I like this kind of thing

The writing is pretty good, and I have a lot of expectations. I feel that it is best to explain the functions of the items more comprehensively. I have never played many games. I recommend it. I've read half of it and it's pretty good so far.