
A Magical Girl Who Works Hard Every Day Wants to Fake Her Death and Retire
劳碌命魔法少女每天都想假死退役
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 166k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
9.7kReads
2.8kShelves
59Chapters
1.5kListens
9.9kReads · all time








From my perspective, the writing is still very good. On a more daily basis, the relationship between the protagonist and his sister is also very good. If possible, you can add some memories, such as interactions with teammates. This type of book may be a bit too much, but the author's writing is still very good, really good. Come on, boss! (⸝⸝⸝>`ˊ<⸝⸝⸝)
It looks good Let me give some comments to the author: 1. For the problem of paragraphing, you can try dividing a paragraph into several lines. Too much text in a whole paragraph makes people not want to read it. 2. The pace is a bit slow. You can have dull daily life, but it lacks "explosive points" and is too boring to attract people. 3. There are many similar themes on Tomatoes, and the unique plot may help it become popular (?)
It's not bad sensory-wise, and it's pretty good for a novice.
So far, I feel good
The boss looks good, meow. Please update it quickly, meow. It looks good every day. The boss cat must not stop updating, meow.
It's good, but there's too little. I finished it in a while. I hope the author will keep updating and not be too sudden.
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