After Being Killed by a Duck, I Became the Biological Son of the Immortal Lord

It suits my taste very well. It's so beautiful that I stayed up late to read it. I want to ask the teacher, will Su Heng and Yi Danchen be together? It's the kind of thing where both parties express their feelings, etc.

I quite like the character of the protagonist at the beginning, so if the system seals the memory of the protagonist, can you write about it in the introduction? It's a bit ridiculous. Just change it and it will be fine [Like]

Summary of experience: The good time of conscience is true and objective, the value is friendly, and the mood is good.

I like it very much. I hope it will be updated soon. It's very annoying to follow up.

There is a plain feeling, good-looking [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's pretty, in line with my taste, and has a slight sense of happiness (•́⌄•́๑)૭✧

The writing is a bit clumsy, there are too many descriptive techniques, and the writing style needs to be improved. I'm disgusted by my coat. It's true that a newborn child, a slap from an adult man, can be as tall as an adult child, at least from the palm to the wrist. It's as tall as a grain of rice when it's born. It's really amazing. It's also my first time seeing it. A baby born at full moon is as small as a five- or six-month-old premature baby, even smaller than a premature baby. It's amazing.

Good-looking(* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤

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