(Single heroine) (For fans of Lu Nuo)
Fang Ge is a rich second-generation kid with no particular hobbies besides watching anime and reading novels. He doesn’t care for sports cars or luxury watches, but he does love tokusatsu shows. Recently, a friend recommended Dragon Raja, so he gave it a try. His friend told him it was a sweet story full of passionate battles, and he believed him. Instead, the story broke him completely, and he died in a fit of rage.
Then he discovered he’d arrived in the world of Dragon Raja and had obtained a System. From the start, he was rewarded with an Ark-One Driver. If that was the case, he would change the world. He would rewrite every regret himself. Herzog, you old villain, prepare to die!
Erii: “Fang Ge, you are my Kagayaki.”
Fang Ge: “Those who take up arms at the break of dawn are accompanied by power from the moment they are born. It is a shackle of fate, but this time, that power will be used to protect.”
Give yourself a five-star review, hehe ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱
The good thing is that it can be seen that it is purely hand-written. The shortcoming is that it is an obvious novice writing style. The first person and the third person are used interchangeably, which is easy to be confused. The character description is a bit too personal, which is a taboo. You can bias your own preferences when writing fan fiction, but you must also respect the characteristics of the characters in the original work. Give four stars for encouragement. Come on. Author, I hope you can change it slowly, and the more you write, the more you speak!
Another one who writes special photos of dragons, here to support 😏 I hope it won't be like the previous ones, where they stop updating for no reason 🤦
It's been a while since I've seen Kamen Rider and Dragon
It's super beautiful, I hope it won't be discontinued.
After reading the comments, most of them are narrated in the first person because they have not read the novel. Try not to use this kind of narration.
It's pretty good-looking, but it's not segmented╮(_)╭The sequence in the dragon family is not stronger the higher it is.
@Parting, update soon 🙂
It would be better to see it in third person
Is this a new book or a new one?