Pokémon: Travel-Type Trainer

I have read all the updated chapters so far. The author has obviously studied seriously and subscribed to PM articles. He has added a lot of content on the basis of PM articles. However, one thing to note is that PMs occupy the main role in PM articles. Each PM needs to be shaped by chapters. This book gives me the feeling that the plot develops too fast, in just thirty or forty years. A lot of things happened in the first chapter. In addition, I think the writing style also needs to be slightly adjusted. It should be relaxed when it is daily and relaxed, and a little more rigorous when it comes to key plots. Using too many emojis does not belong to the writing style. Another important point is that the main line of the book is not clear enough and there are no obvious external factors to guide it. I personally think this is a thing that affects reading. Judging from the current chapter, the author has learned quite a lot of hot words that will appear in PM articles, but the hot words are more about precision than more. Only specialized and specific writing can fix the atmosphere of a book.

I have caught up to the latest 42 chapters. The golden finger is for knowledge retrieval (the scope is the elf knowledge that has been learned), Wuyu Sanjia, the content is really non-existent, and the plot is reasonable. The world view is a pseudo-utopia combined with animation (props and moves are expensive, but money comes quickly and social benefits are high). The difference from the game is that elves can master the skills in the skill pool in advance; the effects of some props have been slightly changed. Characteristics of the protagonist: High luck, easy to meet elves with high qualifications; affectionate and righteous, wasting an elf position to satisfy the wish of the old man.

Could the author consider conquering Elledo (Flash) and Nidoking? I really like these two, but basically no one writes [crying][crying][crying], they all write about Gardevoir, Gengar Charizard and the like.

This is the world of Pokémon in my mind. Choosing an elf depends on the bond. The interaction between people and elf is also warm and interesting. The elf has various personalities, and the image is lively and lively. Full marks.

The author has published a new book. I am here to support [send my heart] At present, this novel is mainly about the interaction between the protagonist and the elves and wild adventures, etc. I occasionally make some videos to earn extra money [Thinking] If you like to read warm daily and travel articles, you can give it a try [Chigua] The quality is also guaranteed. The author has already written a book with a million words and an 8.7 Score [Shy]

I saw the latest chapter, it's pretty good, keep up the good work

It looks good. Please update it quickly. It's not enough to read.

I like the relationship between the protagonist and Pokémon, it's so heartwarming.

It's very warm. It's this mouth that I want to see.

It's reassuring and has no cp... It's beautiful🤤🤤🤤🤤Teacher, you must still have your manuscripts saved (trying to get into the manuscript box)

Very nice! Keep it up

Great, it's a daily bond! [Laugh]

Good-looking and interesting

Warm and everyday, it looks pretty good. I'm just a little worried about what to do with the big-tongued clam in the later stages.

Can you add a flaming horse? My friend looks so handsome and the strength is not low.

I read Chapter 45 and support it with a five-star review.

The last book was very good, this one is cool [cool]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! Anime flavor

I can only say full marks, another good book from Tomato has appeared. This is what Pokémon should be like, a utopian life, where you can go on adventures, form bonds with Pokémon, and encounter more things. Highly recommended, but unfortunately there are too few.

Big cheers for the author

Very nice, highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It looks good so far, but the quantity is too small.

The writing is very good, and the book Baby Bear the author wrote before is also very good [laughs]

The daily writing is very good👌🏻, come on, more more

Okay, okay, I prefer this type of Pokémon novel. I also read the author's previous book, Baby Bear, which was quite good.