Arknights fanfic / Syracuse / Lapland × original male protagonist / childhood sweetheart / slow daily life / two-way redemption / growth direction
A story about a social animal who has no nostalgia for life. He was picked up by the Saluzzo family as a four-year-old child and grew up with the young Lapland in the wind and rain of Syracuse.
Reader comments
The quality is also quite high [learned]
The language, such as character dialogue, is a bit too literary and could be a little more "popular"
Come on, well written. Lao Gong, you are now a tomato-dimensional two-dimensional dog-dog single girl, you must live on.
As of Chapter 22, my evaluation is very good, but it also has shortcomings.
The advantage is that the writing is good, and the description of this environment is very immersive.
However, there are several repeated paragraphs in the back, which makes people feel very confused. This is the sentence, I said it first, and then said it again a few pages later, hoping to correct it later.
Also, the University of Labor, is this book about a single woman pulling a dog? [Crying] [crying]
The quality is also quite high [learned] The language, such as character dialogue, is a bit too literary and could be a little more "popular"
Come on, well written. Lao Gong, you are now a tomato-dimensional two-dimensional dog-dog single girl, you must live on. As of Chapter 22, my evaluation is very good, but it also has shortcomings. The advantage is that the writing is good, and the description of this environment is very immersive. However, there are several repeated paragraphs in the back, which makes people feel very confused. This is the sentence, I said it first, and then said it again a few pages later, hoping to correct it later. Also, the University of Labor, is this book about a single woman pulling a dog? [Crying] [crying]