Taito: He Fell into the Abyss, and I Chased Him for Thirty Thousand Years

The author, your writing style is very good, and the emotions of the characters are also described delicately. However, as a Taito CP article, I personally think that the portrayal of Tailo and Tregear is a bit OOC, so I suggest you mark "OOC apology" in the introduction. Moreover, your book has a lot of private settings (for example: changing the first encounter between Taro and Tregear, and changing the mother of Ultras to an Ultra named Ais... Which refers to these private settings). You must also indicate "a mountain of private settings" or some other label in the introduction in advance. Because you are writing a fanfic, some people are not very receptive to these things and are not very receptive to these changes. You need to pay attention to these things. I am not asking you to change the content of your article. I respect your personal thoughts and creative ideas. I just want you to give an early warning in the introduction. If it is your first time to write a fanfic, you must be careful not to include a third person in the mutual love between Taro and Tregear (regardless of whether they are male or female, whether it is true or not, try to keep their relationship as clean as possible, in any sense) If you think this isn't important, just think I'm farting (I will post some private screenshots in the comment area)

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