There Is Nothing Good Around You, You Must Abandon Everything and Become Stronger

Personally, I feel that as a debut novel for a newcomer, this book is both complete and sincere. It chose the differentiated route of "no system + dark flow + group fighting", which can be regarded as avoiding the most popular system cool writing track. Moreover, I feel that the author has his own ideas. Fighting should be one of the core highlights of the book. It is not a simple numerical collision. There are specific moves, scenes and skill design releases. It can still be seen that the author has put thought into the action scenes. However, the dramatic tension is still relatively young, and the details of the group portraits and world view have not yet been fully developed. If the text details, language expression skills and fluency can be polished in the future, the character creation and image can be written in more depth, and the cost and struggle of "abandoning everything" can be thoroughly written, I believe there will be considerable growth potential as the length of the book unfolds. Personally, I feel that it is more suitable for readers who like Not the Virgin and prefer realistic growth to fantasy.

The language is straightforward, concise and easy to understand. The writing style is a bit green, but the world view is indeed original, and the design of the fighting scenes is also very original. It can be seen that the new teacher is very attentive, and I look forward to the teacher's continuous updates.

It can be seen that the author has his own opinions in writing group portraits. Although the writing is young, it is a very beautiful work for a debut novel. I hope the author will polish it well and show this novel story to everyone, bringing some fresh excitement to Tomato [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

Help🥶... The first few chapters are so bafflingly written that I can't stand them at all... The characters and tools feel so heavy that they almost overflow. Oh my god... I'm just trying to beat the wall🤡

I thought about it but I didn't jump to read it. How come I wrote one stroke in the east and one stroke in the west?

After browsing it briefly, I feel that it is not as exaggerated as the comments section said. I only read the beginning and found it quite interesting.