[Myriad Races] [Shelter Survival] [Lord] [Conquest] [Merchant] [Farming]
The myriad races transmigrate to a world of horrors. From the start, they must choose a shelter. The type of shelter determines their talent:
Choice One: The Flesh Cathedral, a group shelter. An abandoned church made up of living horrors. As you sleep, you may sometimes hear the deep heartbeat and labored breathing left behind by the Old Ones. The ash-filled fireplace constantly demands "fuel," while yearning whispers seem to drift from the long dining table. When the doors close, are you the master of this church, its food, or... its god?
Choice Two: The Apartment of the Dead, a group shelter. A dilapidated, rotten apartment building. If you live here, you must obey the landlord's rules, or you will become a prisoner bound to your room. Poor soul, robbed of your freedom: if you had the chance to choose again, would you rather be swallowed by the night of the world outside, or... step into even deeper darkness?
Choice Three: The Solitary Bamboo Tower, a unique personal shelter. A bamboo tower in an ancient, unknown realm. The mottled marks on the bamboo look like tiny teardrops. Who is singing in the night, and whom do they miss? Spotted bamboo branches, spotted bamboo branches: only spotted bamboo remains here. With just one seed left, can you bloom once more?
"I choose the Solitary Bamboo Tower!" The grain of bamboo in the bamboo case his grandfather had left him, hanging from his neck, gave off a faint warmth. Yao Fan chose the third option without a moment's hesitation.
A seed slowly fell into the pitch-black earth. A dense aura of life spread out, purifying the aura of death clinging to the soil.
"Congratulations! You have awakened the talent: Ten Years of Solitary Bamboo!"
Fifteen chapters in and there's nothing attractive yet. I can't figure out whether you're trying to win over the setting or the main character. From the descriptions of talents, you can understand how awesome the main character's grandpa is, right? The protagonist can't seem to see it, and the daily operations also feel inexplicably stupid. I don't need a shelter to pre-open a return point when I go out to explore. Is it cool to be kicked out? The first time I merged with bamboo, it was full of slots. If I couldn't find a better one, I could choose this grass. But the protagonist didn't find it and merged directly. After planting the bamboo, the land will still be fertile. I don't want to talk about it. It's not reality. I can only say that the plots from 12 to 15 are really human beings? There is no restriction on planting land mines in the seed explosion technique. It only needs to be enchanted to touch the enemy, so it cannot be thrown out? And after the talent upgrade, the consumption will be greater. Isn't this funny? If you like it, just die. Anyway, newbies will evolve if they die a few more times.
I would like to give the author a suggestion. Generally, when people click on the book to read it, they put themselves as the protagonist, for the sake of fun, to see different scenery, and to use their imagination. So if you start to introduce yourself as a new author, this will dissuade many people, because readers are not there to help you grow. Even if you are a new author, don't write about it. You won't gain any favor. Moreover, new authors naturally give people the feeling that their writing style is not good, the plot is not good, and it is easy to discontinue updates. Many people will just give up. Just write well, come on.
Red and fiery, in a trance
Not bad. .