"Children, I have traveled through time."
"It seems to be a comprehensive comic world."
"Hey, I still have a system."
"Wait a minute and let me study my golden finger..."
…
Just when Nishikoribu Qiu was indulging in the joy of studying golden fingers...
The door rings...
"Boom..."
"Boom..."
"Boom..."
"Please wait a moment, come right away."
He subconsciously replied...
Suddenly, there was silence.
"Tsk——"
A sharp samurai sword pierced the door and came straight towards Nishikori Buqiu!
"What a joke!"
"Isn't this a daily and casual variety comic?"
Reader comments
The first novel written like this is already considered excellent. I will give it five stars to support it. Although the plot has not yet been fully developed, it is obvious that the author has an outline and ideas. The writing style is also relatively smooth. The character of the protagonist has indeed been created. The content of the novel is funny and pleasant. The first dozen chapters are indeed a bit rough, but it can be seen that the author is also growing later.
I'll give it three stars first. It's mainly because it seems to be progressing very quickly. In fact, the plot has not unfolded at all. The author wrote it this way and it can be divided into volumes. We need to wait and see whether it will be a good review or a bad review. If the poisonous point is persuaded, two stars will be given. If there is no poisonous point, it will be updated to 120 pictures. I will give it 4 stars.
The world view is well integrated
The number of words is too few, not enough to read
Newbies writing books, please support me, listen to your opinions, and give me a chance to write ten chapters.
The protagonist is a bit slow to learn the types of skills. There is no fighting method yet. They are all for strengthening the hardware. You can also learn other things.
The first novel written like this is already considered excellent. I will give it five stars to support it. Although the plot has not yet been fully developed, it is obvious that the author has an outline and ideas. The writing style is also relatively smooth. The character of the protagonist has indeed been created. The content of the novel is funny and pleasant. The first dozen chapters are indeed a bit rough, but it can be seen that the author is also growing later.
I'll give it three stars first. It's mainly because it seems to be progressing very quickly. In fact, the plot has not unfolded at all. The author wrote it this way and it can be divided into volumes. We need to wait and see whether it will be a good review or a bad review. If the poisonous point is persuaded, two stars will be given. If there is no poisonous point, it will be updated to 120 pictures. I will give it 4 stars.
The world view is well integrated
The number of words is too few, not enough to read
Newbies writing books, please support me, listen to your opinions, and give me a chance to write ten chapters.
The protagonist is a bit slow to learn the types of skills. There is no fighting method yet. They are all for strengthening the hardware. You can also learn other things.
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