My Online Date Is a 40-Year-Old Woman Who Sells Sesame Cakes?

The subject matter is good and the characters are very attractive, but there are too many insulting words and it makes me uncomfortable to watch. I hope it can be changed.

Qin Yitong was right about the waiter thing. Zhong Shuyao had no choice but to hold back her voice. She was unmarried, raised a child, and spoke harsh words behind everyone's back. Over the past ten years, she had become accustomed to tolerating what she shouldn't. This was wrong. Zhong Shuyao changed her mind. But human nature is enough to kill parents who have no children or people who are not related by blood. Qin Yitong was too impulsive and said what he shouldn't have said. He made unnecessary trouble and added a burden to Zhong Shuyao. He was inexplicably slapped by a male guest wearing a safety helmet. He also unwisely misunderstood Zhong Shuyao. Think about it, if you understand everything from any aspect, you must rely on factual evidence, or if you personally understand this person, you should not believe what others say and preconceptions. In the end, it is better to have a quarrel in advance and a misunderstanding and find out later. There is really no one who can investigate clearly by any means. In the end, it was the male Wang Baojie who put the blame on others. Qin Yitong's joke was too sure to get out of control. He shouldn't make fun of people who don't joke with Zhong Shuyao. Zhong Shuyao's relationship is serious. Qin Yitong must realize this and take the relationship seriously instead of leaving these things to untie after the New Year and adding unnecessary trouble.

It's quite interesting, but when I read this novel from a God's perspective, I have a different feeling about Qin and Zhong's "half a year online". The two comforted each other. Even if Zhong lied about his age, it actually had little impact on these six months. So why was Qin angry? (Own opinions, accept corrections) First, it may be related to the environment in which she grew up, and second, she started to have different feelings for Zhong but could not accept the other party's age deception. She should have been online like Zhong in the beginning to find comfort. Age and comfort did not have much impact, so the two comforted each other (before Qin proposed a relationship) The second thing is that Qin made things difficult for Zhong. Even if he compensated, he still felt very uncomfortable. I understand that some plots are forced for the sake of the subsequent development of the novel, but I implore the author to make the following days sweet [blowing kiss] The above are just my reflections. All I have to say is that I feel sorry for Zhong. I hope Qin can be sincere and stop being so arrogant and arrogant (the purpose of not being so arrogant and arrogant is not because he is afraid of Qin chasing his wife in the future, but because he doesn't want to make Zhong suffer even more. Some words have been said no matter how he makes up for the damage in the future). I hope that Zhong's future life will not be hindered by wind and frost, but will be full of sweetness. [Sending Hearts] Thank you to the author for writing such a thoughtful book [already planted]

It's pretty good. It was a bit cliche in the early stages, but the two protagonists have grown significantly in the latter part, especially Qin, who is no longer like the stereotypical "boss boss". It's not like he's a sex change tyrant. Male tyrants are not as cute as Mr. Qin. In addition, I was pleasantly surprised by the setting of Gentle Nian Shang. It was not written in a way that one party is dependent on the other. The Nian Shang sister is gentle and tough, has self-esteem and a bottom line, and can support her daughter on her own. She is not a weak person who can be bullied and has no independent opinions. She is well portrayed and makes people fall in love with her. Who doesn't like this kind of sister. Overall I thought it was quite good, the plot was very sweet. I feel like the author is getting better and better as he writes. It starts with a cliche in the beginning, but becomes quite warm in the end. Both characters are growing and changing. No character is perfect from the beginning. Many comments criticize the character. In fact, it is unnecessary. Everyone has shortcomings. The protagonist is perfect from the beginning. Growth is interesting.

Thank you sisters for your support. I am very happy if someone reads it. I will also carefully read every comment you make, learn from your suggestions, and speed up the rectification. This is my first time writing a novel about confrontation and age difference. The writing may not be very good, so please forgive me! [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It turns out that I have been falling in love with the same author over and over again. When I saw a familiar name, I suddenly remembered that last year I also followed the works of this author Baobao. At that time, I was really completely absorbed by the charm of the text. I remember it was the supporting character Shanshan who traveled through time and loved that book so much! As a result, I accidentally clicked on it today and felt the familiar heartache and familiar taste. The main reason is that the works produced by this author are absolutely excellent. They are not the same plots, but more innovative and eye-catching works! I fully recommend everyone to read this novel seriously. You will find that it is a treasure. I read the introduction at first, but I was fine (because I am very picky about introductions) and then I got into it. From the beginning until now, I am not willing to leave at all. You must finish it! Look, the author, baby, still remembers me [love][love][cry] I really like this writing style!

As I was looking at it, I suddenly remembered that what I was doing last year was the most popular earthy pure style. Congratulations on the big result [laughing and crying]

It's very interesting. I look forward to the sweet emotional drama [Sending Hearts]

So far it's pretty good, it's pretty good to watch, but some of Qin's early actions were quite irritating.

A very pyrotechnic novel with detailed descriptions.