In the ancient elven world, people have had a legend since ancient times, saying that a human created the ancient gods. What is the hidden meaning of the contradictory nursery rhyme? Was my time travel an accident?
"Cough, cough..." The old prophet predicted the disaster of mankind, but he never thought that he would be the solution to the problem...
In this era when the gods were talking in their sleep, Yang Yanshi carved a mark on his shoulders and unknowingly broke into His chessboard.
! I am a high school student and I wrote this purely original book during my vacation! I know that the plot may be a bit crazy, and the text may not be that skillful, but I hope you can understand me. This is my first book, and I hope it can be written well! Can you help me take a second look? QAQ
Reader comments
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The writing is proficient, the description is restrained, the narrative is neat, and the psychological portrayal of the characters is well done. The sentences are smooth and beautiful, not obscure in reading, and can well arouse the readers' emotions.
1. The writing style is delicate and smooth, the text is very graphic, and the reading feels very immersive. 2. The words and sentences are very charming, the narrative is relaxed and relaxed, and the atmosphere is directly full. 3. The writing skills are solid, the language is concise, the plot description is moving, and it is very immersive to read. The author's writing style is very brilliant, his language is delicate and textured, he doesn't pile up fancy words, but he is very good at exaggerating the atmosphere. The emotions of the characters and the pictures of the scenes are vividly unfolded through the text. The narrative rhythm is comfortable and the reading experience is very good. It is easy to get involved in the story. The writing is gentle and powerful, and a few strokes can outline vivid scenes and moods. The writing is smooth and natural, and the emotions are hidden between the words. There is no trace of deliberate carving, but each word is moving. The atmosphere and appeal of the story are extremely strong. The writing is proficient, the description is restrained, the narrative is neat, and the psychological portrayal of the characters is well done. The sentences are smooth and beautiful, not obscure in reading, and can well arouse the readers' emotions.