My name is Lin Yu, and my deskmate is Su Qingzhi, the campus belle everyone at school agrees is the prettiest.
The boys crowd the hallway to give her love letters and milk tea, making a huge fuss. I always keep my head down and work through practice problems, never even sparing her a glance.
Everyone thinks I'm aloof.
Only I know why: last autumn, I saw her stand on tiptoe and kiss another girl from the class next door on the corner of her mouth. That image burned itself into my mind, becoming an unspoken wall between us.
My best buddy has fallen for her and begs me to set them up. I spend three whole days trying to talk him out of it, finding all sorts of ways to say, "Don't humiliate yourself." But he won't give up until he hits a brick wall.
I can't refuse, so I steel myself and go find Su Qingzhi.
Instead, she corners me in the stairwell. "Do you really like watching other people chase me that much?"
I freeze. Before I can explain, she suddenly leans closer.
"I like you."
My brain crashes completely.
What is going on?
Isn't she gay? How could she like me?
The quality is very high, the characters are very three-dimensional, and it has a realistic feel, um... Very similar... The shortcomings are also very obvious, I don't see this... It's not bad, it's just that I don't want to... It feels like watching real things... And it's from a third-person perspective... I can't immerse myself in that world at all... It's like watching a story... It's so uncomfortable... It's really uncomfortable... My heart... Has no waves... It feels complicated... It feels so far away... For me... I don't even have a person I like, so how can it be a kind of decline of blood? And I have never had such an experience... I thought of a scene... An ordinary person, standing in the air, with traffic below, as if two worlds overlapped, reading a novel, this narrative is too real... I can't take it in... Or... I'm too involved? It makes me uncomfortable... I almost came here to have some fun... But ended up being forced to think about the philosophy of life... I went to find some other books to relieve myself... It's September 18th, 22.43.
Not bad, the atmosphere is well controlled, but the dialogue looks very AI-heavy. The long and long exchanges look a lot like the novels I wrote using DS, but it's still quite sweet.
It's beautiful. I don't like comments, but this one is really beautiful.
The content and plot are very good, and the description of the characters is vivid. Good luck to the author.
Keep it up, keep it up
Good looking, love to read, more to come
It's so good. The first good article in autumn.
It's good to watch and the plot is very interesting. Please update soon.