Beng Tie: This Is Really Just a Game

It's an interesting game article, it reminds me of another one, but that one has been discontinued [face covering], but I think this one is even better. I think I can add some imagination and whimsy [laughing]

The author writes very well, the writing is smooth, and he updates diligently. Although it is a new book, according to the author's update speed, there will be no sudden outages and constipation, so there is no need to keep the book. It is now 80,000 words long, but I don't know why fewer people have read it. I personally feel that the introduction is not very attractive. I have read books with similar names before. Although the content is not the same as this book, there are quite a few books of this type that directly transfer games in parallel worlds. It does feel a bit boring to read, but this book seems to be good so far. Based on my experience, I can roughly guess the author's outline. If it is written down, it should be good. If the author has extra experience You can do a novel tweet. After all, the current performance of this book does not look very good. The content is good, but the introduction and title are not very attractive. This book seems to be a light novel at the moment, but the sense of crisis is also quite heavy. The ups and downs of the plot are expressed appropriately. The interspersed plots that have nothing to do with the main content will not make people feel confused. I hope The author can insist on writing without cutting the book. At present, it seems that the protagonist should follow Kevin's path of salvation, but it is similar to the reincarnation of Weng Xing, or a parallel universe, but the protagonist, as a time-traveling body, is a high-level observer in terms of personality. A book I read before also had the protagonist become a savior. Well, reverse the If ending, because the protagonist is a high-level observer. I already have the capital to become a star god. According to the content of the author's current article, there are quite a lot of foreshadowings. It's a bit like a game of raising gu. I boldly guessed that in countless parallel worlds, each protagonist finds a path to success in a similar but subtly different way. This type is somewhat similar to a novel I read before about the protagonist becoming Elio, and then I Our current first-person perspective protagonist is the winner or the final winner. I have not found any difference between the protagonist and himself in those parallel worlds. However, according to the collapse worldview in which the protagonist lives, the equilibrium [interaction] is most likely broken. Otherwise, it would feel like the world is doomed. Does the protagonist's savior behavior mean that he is the equilibrium?

The front is a little difficult to break, but the back is much better. Author, my suggestion is not to make too many jokes. The protagonist is pretty good if he is normal. The character design of Lezi is not very good. If it is normal, for example, if you conceive a script yourself and then experience it deeply, I think it will be very cool. Of course, this is just a suggestion.

Potential stock [Like] So far, there are no big problems with the setting. It is quite novel to me. The author has a lot of foreshadowings. I look forward to all the revelations. [I learned] I haven't seen anything particularly OOC in terms of character design. The protagonist has no tendency at the moment, but they all use the Kevin template. [Thinking] Bao Buqi is also a savior boy. I hope the author can look forward to the next plot.

Although there are many flaws in the writing perspective, the flaws are not concealed. As a fan novel, it is undoubtedly of high quality, hard work, out of the traditional framework, with personal expression. The most important thing is that the plot is interesting, the pace is not sluggish, and it has public viewing value. I won't say how good this masterpiece is, but if it can be completed successfully while maintaining the quality, it will undoubtedly become a rare breath of fresh air in Bengtie fan fiction.

Don't die like the last book TT The setting of the boss is very novel, but the name of the male protagonist is a bit difficult to name (my classmate is also named Liao Xin). I personally think that if the author writes on this subject for a long time, the profit will definitely be very good (what am I talking about) The teacher is so awesome, he updates it at least twice a day (it seems like

It's not bad, it's a bit novel. Is there any emotional line in the follow-up? If you don't have enough writing skills, it's best not to write it. If you are confident enough to write it well, let's talk about it later. Personal preference is not to have a female protagonist. Focus on the plot. Come on.

It's a very creative game article. I hope it can be stable in the future.

I would like to make a small suggestion, can you promote the plot? (It means that the player joins this world view, causing the plot to change), or there may be fewer copies

Keep writing, don't cut it, it's still very good to read. It's okay, at least I think it's okay, and I have some motivation to pursue it [eating melon]

Yes, very thoughtful [Like]

Not bad, but there are too few main lines. You can write more. There is no need to write anything else.

Not bad, worth a look, 10,000 hours certified

The style is rather refreshing. The author buried a lot of pitfalls in the early stage and is a little worried that he won't be able to fill them in the later stage.

If it looks good, I will reward it directly. I hope there will be more.

Yes, there are no bad points so far, but the author is obviously not very good at setting up foreshadowings. He made it clear at the end, probably because this is a fast-paced and refreshing novel.

I like this book very much

It feels pretty good. Please support me.

Haha, do you need a reason to give a good review? [Laughs crookedly]

So far, it's still a good fanfic

The subject matter is great. Let's check out the excitement of the dungeon later. I hope the protagonist has his own growth system and can be added to the ranking list, such as the first hunting list, the first destruction list, and the second list.