Demon Judge: The Chinese Exam-Taking Crowd Doesn’t Want to Be Put on Trial

To my dear Tsukiyoyuki: Hello. Is everything okay? I am writing this letter to ask you for a favor. As you know, I am about to participate in a large-scale event called "Magical Girl's Witch Trial". I heard that you are familiar with it, so I am specifically asking for your advice. I currently have three main concerns and hope to get your advice: ——Li Hua

I used to read a lot of books written by people and felt that I was pretty good at it, but now that I have written a lot, I feel that I still need to continue to learn and improve. On the one hand, there is the issue of first person. There is a small group of readers who don't like first person. This is normal. First, readers cannot take on the role of the protagonist. Second, when readers read novels, they come to see the protagonist do things, watch the plot develop, and see the story's twists and turns, not to watch the protagonist's inner thoughts. Indeed, in this regard, although I tried my best to integrate the inner thoughts of the protagonist into the advancement of the plot, I can feel that my writing skills are still lacking... On the other hand, there is the issue of writing. Some readers in the comment area also noticed that I did use AI to assist my writing. But I think that instead of clinging to illusory things like artificial intelligence, it is better to seriously polish the accuracy of the language, improve the smoothness of the plot, and make the readers happy. (After all, there are almost no people in this era who don't know how to use AI to help improve efficiency.) But of course I wrote the main part myself. I also adjusted the stupid AI according to the reader's preferences, deleted a glance at AI's sentence structure, and changed the descriptive language... But I still have to continue to improve my writing style. If you readers enjoy reading it, please leave a positive review. Maomao thanks you for your support😘; but if you feel uncomfortable watching it, it's okay to scold Maomao🤭, but if you like it lightly, you still have to maintain an orderly network environment after all...

It looks good, I hope the author won't stop updating it 😢 😢

She stood at the edge of the crowd, farthest from the fireplace. The light was dim, but her eyes were bright. That kind of brightness is not excitement and curiosity, it is like the brightness of a cat when it is staring at its prey in the dark. Then she looked at me. The moment my eyes met hers, she smiled. Not a polite, polite smile, but a meaningful smile that says, "I know who you are." A chill ran down my back. 🤔

The angle is interesting. I have read it in its entirety, and as a fellow Mozai fan author, I will write a short review here. This book is very readable and well-written, and the writing is very smooth. These points are much better than mine. I guess the reading rate of 100,000 words for this book should be quite high. Although it can be seen that a lot of AI polishing was used, the main body is still written by the author, and there are many small ingenuities. The author's AI training is also very good. If you don't read it carefully, it doesn't have much AI flavor. The protagonist is Li Hua, who is also very good at making jokes and expresses the thoughts of many people. If the author controls the follow-up well, it may be ranked at the same level as "Zi Gong", which is also the top three Tomato Magic fans.

Update quickly, don't stop updating, update twice a day!! As long as there is only one female protagonist, Hiro!!

Absolute pressure, the resulting disguise, teaches you to do the questions...

Please support me if you write a magic song

The writing style is very good and very logical.

Come on, I love watching it, especially the BE line