Shen Sheng originally thought that he could live a relaxed and happy life by bringing MC plug-in to another world.
But what he didn't expect was that not only did he travel through scrawls, but the world he traveled to was also a famous cesspool. After all, no world with the word "Terra" in it was a good place.
Standing on Chernobog Street, Shen Sheng gritted his teeth and said, "If I can go back, I must beat that bastard goddess."
(The introduction is difficult, please let me know if you have any questions.)
Reader comments
The writing is quite good, but the MC is a bit harsh. After all, MC has been synonymous with invincibility since he appeared. Also, when will the mod be added?
Regarding the content, others have raised it in the comment area, so I won't go into it. I want to address typos, missing content, and typography issues.
There are actually not many typos, and the author can pay attention to them when typing.
I haven't finished reading this yet, but so far I've seen three places where content is lacking (I've commented on all of them).
In terms of formatting, one or two paragraphs are not segmented correctly, and some places have punctuation errors or have not been deleted (for example, one sentence uses two left quotation marks). To be honest, I almost quit twice in the middle because the formatting looked uncomfortable.
The author can read it himself before publishing, and these problems can basically be avoided.
After reading it, I read the first few chapters again and realized why I felt uncomfortable reading it in some places. The layout is not a big problem. It's because the author has several chapters with a similar number of words in each paragraph, resulting in each paragraph being about the same length, and I'm used to reading paragraphs of different lengths, so it made some parts of the book uncomfortable for me to read.
Very good, although the protagonist may be a bit weak compared to his high combat power, but he actually used an iron sleeve in the front? You guy
I didn't look carefully at the default diamond [laughing]
The author had something to say and didn't know why it couldn't be posted, so he posted it in the comment area. Currently, the mods recommended to be added include drawing swords, firearms, and iron magic. I don't know which one everyone wants to see, so I will add it. Of course, if there are other mods you want to see, you can also tell me. I will try to add those that can be reasonably added.
Finally, I hope that if you have any comments about the book, you can put it forward, I will read it, and if there are any problems, I will try my best to correct them [sending my heart].
It's interesting, but the pace is a bit fast
A good book with great potential [laughing]
The protagonist's martial arts are considered top-notch in Arknights fan fiction.
Not bad, quite fun. The only shortcoming is that the pace is a bit too fast. It feels like you are rushing to catch up with the plot. Slow down a little and add a little more daily life. The protagonist's daily life on Rhodes Island has been explained in one stroke [crying] [crying] [crying]
Looks more comfortable.
It's pretty, but it's a bit missing.
Does fighting Tallulah count as fighting a dragon? [Adoration]
It's so beautiful, at first I thought it was getting better. In fact, it is an invincible article, a refreshing article, and very interesting.
I feel that the equivalent exchange module is a bit too suitable for Arknights. Just picking up a piece of Origin Stone on the side of the road can be compared to the Endless Ingot. It is the weight of a civilization.
The writing is quite good, but the MC is a bit harsh. After all, MC has been synonymous with invincibility since he appeared. Also, when will the mod be added?
Regarding the content, others have raised it in the comment area, so I won't go into it. I want to address typos, missing content, and typography issues. There are actually not many typos, and the author can pay attention to them when typing. I haven't finished reading this yet, but so far I've seen three places where content is lacking (I've commented on all of them). In terms of formatting, one or two paragraphs are not segmented correctly, and some places have punctuation errors or have not been deleted (for example, one sentence uses two left quotation marks). To be honest, I almost quit twice in the middle because the formatting looked uncomfortable. The author can read it himself before publishing, and these problems can basically be avoided. After reading it, I read the first few chapters again and realized why I felt uncomfortable reading it in some places. The layout is not a big problem. It's because the author has several chapters with a similar number of words in each paragraph, resulting in each paragraph being about the same length, and I'm used to reading paragraphs of different lengths, so it made some parts of the book uncomfortable for me to read.
Very good, although the protagonist may be a bit weak compared to his high combat power, but he actually used an iron sleeve in the front? You guy I didn't look carefully at the default diamond [laughing]
The author had something to say and didn't know why it couldn't be posted, so he posted it in the comment area. Currently, the mods recommended to be added include drawing swords, firearms, and iron magic. I don't know which one everyone wants to see, so I will add it. Of course, if there are other mods you want to see, you can also tell me. I will try to add those that can be reasonably added. Finally, I hope that if you have any comments about the book, you can put it forward, I will read it, and if there are any problems, I will try my best to correct them [sending my heart].
It's interesting, but the pace is a bit fast
A good book with great potential [laughing]
The protagonist's martial arts are considered top-notch in Arknights fan fiction.
Not bad, quite fun. The only shortcoming is that the pace is a bit too fast. It feels like you are rushing to catch up with the plot. Slow down a little and add a little more daily life. The protagonist's daily life on Rhodes Island has been explained in one stroke [crying] [crying] [crying]
Looks more comfortable.
It's pretty, but it's a bit missing.
Does fighting Tallulah count as fighting a dragon? [Adoration]
It's so beautiful, at first I thought it was getting better. In fact, it is an invincible article, a refreshing article, and very interesting.
I feel that the equivalent exchange module is a bit too suitable for Arknights. Just picking up a piece of Origin Stone on the side of the road can be compared to the Endless Ingot. It is the weight of a civilization.