Bringing MC Items to Arknights

The writing is quite good, but the MC is a bit harsh. After all, MC has been synonymous with invincibility since he appeared. Also, when will the mod be added?

Regarding content issues, others have raised them in the comment area, so I won't go into them. I want to address typos, missing content, and typography issues. There are actually not many typos, and the author can pay attention to them when typing. I haven't finished reading this yet, but so far I have seen three places where content is missing (I have commented on them all). In terms of formatting, one or two paragraphs are not segmented correctly, and some places have punctuation errors or have not been deleted (for example, one sentence uses two left quotation marks). To be honest, I almost quit twice in the middle because the formatting looked uncomfortable. The author can read it himself before publishing, and these problems can basically be avoided. After reading it, I read the first few chapters again and realized why I felt uncomfortable reading it in some places. The layout is not a big problem. It's because the author has several chapters with a similar number of words in each paragraph, resulting in each paragraph being about the same length, and I'm used to reading paragraphs of different lengths, so it made some parts of the book uncomfortable for me to read.

Very good, although the protagonist may be a bit weak compared to his high combat power, but he actually used an iron sleeve in the front? You guy didn't look carefully at the default diamond🤭

It's cool, but Ark stories are like this. It's not just our love for the story of this game. The author who can write the story itself has the ultimate love, so the quality of the Ark stories is generally not too bad. Moreover, this article has been specialized in the fun aspect. The only thing I want now is that I hope it can be updated to the end. Wait, I'm talking about the completion of Ark (laughs) Uh, I saw Casimir. Not everyone can accept the plot of Hai Hu. Also, please don't treat it like traditional fairy tales. Women have reasons for everything they do. Men who don't bow to the protagonist are guilty. Please don't do this, okay? This is too tacky

The author had something to say and didn't know why it couldn't be posted, so he posted it in the comment area. Currently, the mods recommended to be added include drawing swords, firearms, and iron magic. I don't know which one everyone wants to see, so I will add it. Of course, if there are other mods you want to see, you can also tell me. I will try to add those that can be reasonably added. Finally, I hope that everyone can put forward any comments they have about the book. I will read it and I will try my best to correct it if there are any problems💕.

It's interesting, but the pace is a bit fast

Not bad, quite fun. The only shortcoming is that the pace is a bit too fast. It feels like you are rushing to catch up with the plot. Slow down a little and add a little more daily life. The protagonist's daily life on Rhodes Island has been explained in one stroke 😢 😢 😢

The protagonist's martial arts are considered top-notch in Arknights fan fiction.

A good book with great potential 🤭

It's pretty, but it's a bit missing.