Ling Shu transmigrated from the modern world to a cultivation realm. After finally achieving great success in her cultivation, she was struck by lightning and died ⊙▽⊙. Luckily, the System she’d activated at the last moment gave her another chance to transmigrate. But where the heck had it brought her? An Ultraman world, of all places! After becoming Ultraman Liunaise, she finally got used to combining Ultraman studies with cultivation, only to discover that she couldn’t control her mermaid form while still underage. With the Ultras eyeing her, she clutched her little chubby fish tail and trembled. There went her proud sword cultivator’s bearing. Resigned to her fate, she let them tug at her tail. But why were those Ultras looking stranger and stranger the more they stroked it? Ultras are scary! Get out of here, fast! Keep away from Ultras! At last, she made it to Earth to slack off, happily hunting for treasure in the ocean, only to be cornered by several Ultras who’d followed her scent. Seriously, she was about to lose it...
[The author has made some things up, and the timeline may be a bit chaotic. If you have suggestions or know the lore well, feel free to share and I’ll take a look. If it can be changed, I’ll change it. I like a good, logical story too. It might have no CP, or it might be one girl with multiple partners. I’ll write more bonus chapters for you to enjoy. This is just a wild flight of fancy, so please don’t be harsh. I’ll try to stick to the spirit and characterization of the original Ultraman series, though I don’t know it very well and am just doing my best to imitate it. I hope everyone enjoys the story.]
It feels more like doing an OC than writing a story. There are a lot of the author's own words (or used to supplement other perspectives). In fact, it would be better to delete some of the words, such as repeatedly emphasizing the heroine's physique, suddenly inserting a sentence that the author wants to add in a scene where the heroine should not know the information, etc. It feels a bit out of context when reading. We also need to think deeply about the character of the heroine. The character is plump but her behavior, speech and thinking are not what this setting should be. It is a bit superficial. It's completely suitable for an OC, but writing a story requires a certain logic. It's not feasible to rely on vernacular to fill in the characters and unfold the story. There are very few people who write about Ultra themes. Four stars encourage me. Come on, the author.
I think the author's writing is quite good. It's rare to see such a subject. The writing style is very good. There are 28 chapters in one breath. I enjoyed reading it 🥰 🥰 🥰 I feel that the system of cultivating immortals and Ultraman are perfectly integrated.
I saw a lot of authors writing Ultra Cultivation novels, and I feel that the writing style of this year's Ultra Cultivation novels has become much better. I remembered that the Ultra Cultivation novels I read before were either unfinished or abandoned. Ultra Cultivation novels are very difficult to write, so you have to persevere.
It's very good. The heroine is very to my taste. The whole book is not very OOC, and the various characters are not very human. The character of the heroine is very good. Overall, there are no big problems.
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Renew!! The author's soul returns...𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles...𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back...𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul is back... Singing high and triumphant... We are all in the same robe...𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back. In the first watch, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; in the second watch, the sullen expression is slightly lighter, and the viewers begin to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat! 👍😄
It's great, I love reading it, please give it a thumbs up to the author😳💕It would be better if you could secretly update Chapter 10 to scare me😏
I love the author so much, this plot is so cool. I just don't like the color of the patterns on their bodies, but for the rest, I'm super satisfied!!!!!!!!!! Really, really satisfied!!!
Please update it quickly
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