Pokémon: I Don't Want to Be a Bad Person

The writing style is relatively mature, and it makes you want to read it. I also like the various descriptions in the article, including but not limited to the appearance, scenes and atmosphere. For those who like to see the world view of Dark Pokémon, I recommend investing in it. The disadvantage is that this article is about the world view of Dark Pokémon. For someone like me who loves Pokémon deeply, the description of damage to Pokémon in the middle makes me want to skip it. The following is just my personal opinion and does not affect reading. Some of the punctuation marks in the article are a bit common in male porn novels. I prefer to use exclamation points. In fact, I think using periods is enough for some sentence patterns. Although there is nothing wrong with using exclamation points, it can cause some drama for some reason. Since this article has been greatly revised, I will review it again. The overall writing style is softer, not as dark as the first time, with more detailed daily life and interactions with Pokémon. I personally prefer the narrative and writing style of the new version. The characters are more vivid and warmer. Long live the gentle writing style! If I insist on talking about the lightning protection point, the protagonist has a mythical beast following him, but he has no idea of ​​conquering it at the moment. The girl in the protagonist group (probably) has the ability of the mythical beast. And os really want to see more of the sister with Ibrahimovic

The author's writing skills are good, the battles are good, and the text quality is online. However, the writing is too short, there are no long battles, the scene description is average, and sometimes lacks detailed support. There are too many daily chapters and water injection. If the scene description can be optimized, the daily paragraphs can be polished, and the redundant content in the later period can be streamlined. It will be greatly improved. In a word, the future is promising. It has a solid foundation and needs to be polished. It is already very good as a debut novel.

It's over. I'm the boss of the water gym and I can't log back in with both accounts [crying][crying][crying]

It's so well written, I like it so much. Come on, author, I will be sad if you don't write well.