Epoch: The Knowledge-Seeking Half-Blood Elf

It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure running account. This kind of wonderful text that just looks at the setting collection and doesn't make me feel happy at all. It's not an AI product, but I'm still a little moved by it.

Looks good so far Look good. Suddenly one is missing, and I will come back from the future to remind you. It's very uncomfortable. Also, let's make you a smart person. Only you will go to the library. I have to come back to remind you. Other protagonists come back, and they come back to help themselves improve. You, who came back from the future, can't beat yourself alone to help others improve. You are the protagonist.

After reading a little bit, I think the setting is quite interesting. Why is gender none? Nothing is worse than a woman. And there are too many Supreme Editions. Not many people can easily spend 10 million. Among them, those who play games are in the minority, let alone spend it on a game they have never played. Yes, the main character feels so good and gives out benefits every day. Others, on the other hand, do not play any role. It can even be said that they receive benefits at zero cost, which makes them appear to be taken advantage of. And there are so many chapters to write a guide. If you really want to cultivate strong people, you only need to find talented people and teach them upgrade strategies. The strategy for refining equipment is really thankless.

There are obvious advantages and disadvantages for a newbie on the road. The advantage is that the world view is large, there are many professions, and the author wants to write some new things, and it is done by hand. The disadvantage is that he wants to write all the concepts that appear, which makes some places stinky and long. I personally think that the names and functions of new concepts can be introduced.

The writing style needs to be improved, and the setting is very good and has potential. In the middle of reading, the protagonist from the future traveled back in time. I felt that the tone of the dialogue was particularly feminine and I read the comments. It seems that the author is a habitual offender when it comes to gender issues. In fact, there is a large audience for transgender articles, and there are many good-quality ones. However, it is recommended to mark it in the introduction, which can effectively filter readers and improve ratings. Otherwise, people who don't like this category will easily click in and give negative reviews. You can't have both drainage and ratings.

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It failed in essence, but it was easy to see and feel, so it is still four stars for encouragement. The taboo in fictional fast food novels is to have empty content. Don't fill the whole story with setting background and feed it to readers. You are not playing in a tavern, and readers are not big fat fish. The characters in the novel will not move on their own as the settings become more complete. Use stories to push the time of the book, use conflicts to shape characters and trigger explosive points, and use narratives to create a background worldview to make your novel come alive. Don't pile up tens of thousands of words to create a simple plot of eating and drinking. What you wrote is a novel, not a collection of settings. Finally, hand rubs are good. It's not that AI is bad, it's just that hand rubbing is better. I like the sense of life between the lines.

| ┣┫████ Onto ┗┻—┛Update quickly Dear Daddy: Seeing words is like meeting each other, and spreading the letter is soothing. Falling in love with you is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in this world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or coming up with ideas, but suddenly having you makes me worried about you and I can't let go of you. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning or a nap at noon, I love you. By the way, do you still have it in your draft box? 🍉🍉🍉

It's quite interesting, but the settings are explained in too much detail. It's a long paragraph and I want to skip it.

I don't comment on whether this book is good or not. The reason why I gave it 4 stars is because the author sometimes writes too much about the settings, and sometimes only writes one or two settings. For us readers, sometimes we just look at the settings every day when we go online, and we can read one or two chapters. Therefore, I recommend only buying 50 or 100 copies of this book. Then you can start watching. I don't mind reading books every day.