Epoch: the Hybrid Goblin of the Academic Sect

Looks good so far Look good. Suddenly one is missing, and I will come back from the future to remind you. It's very uncomfortable. Also, let's make you a smart person. Only you will go to the library. I have to come back to remind you. Other protagonists come back, and they come back to help themselves improve. You, who came back from the future, can't beat yourself alone to help others improve. You are the protagonist.

After reading a little bit, I think the setting is quite interesting. Why is gender none? Nothing is worse than a woman. And there are too many Supreme Editions. Not many people can easily spend 10 million. Among them, those who play games are in the minority, let alone spend it on a game they have never played. Yes, the main character feels so good and gives out benefits every day. Others, on the other hand, have no effect. It can even be said that they receive benefits at zero cost. The protagonist is clearly taken advantage of.

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There are obvious advantages and disadvantages for a newbie on the road. The advantage is that the world view is large, there are many professions, and the author wants to write some new things, and it is done by hand. The disadvantage is that he wants to write all the concepts that appear, which makes some places stinky and long. I personally think that the names and functions of new concepts can be introduced.

Reasonable setting, grand world view, non-AI writing, Rabbit Head is worth reading

Not bad, pretty good online writing flow.

Not bad, there is room for improvement

I like to see this type of

Yes, the article is too short

Come on come on come on come on

Now that I see it, it seems to be quite to my liking. I hope the author will update it more.

Not bad. The author's writing is more detailed. On the one hand, it is more realistic and on the other hand, the progress will be slower. There are pros and cons.

Can you add a female protagonist (I hope it will be a single female protagonist). The name of the female protagonist will be nicer. It won't be discontinued or unfinished. I hope you can add a female protagonist. There won't be too many female protagonists or no female protagonist. I beg the author to unify it.

Good looking Come on, author

Not bad, I think the setting is a bit interesting [eating melon]

The writing is pretty good. Still good on tomatoes.

It looks good, but it's too short.

It looks good. You can see that you put a lot of effort into it. Come on.

I originally wrote about 200 words, but I didn't see my comment in the comment area, so I simply put the question in the discussion area. If the author can, please remember to respond.

It looks good. I rely on my own study and research to improve my strength. The system and logic are relatively reasonable. I haven't found any poisonous points so far (I personally don't mind transforming).

The writing is quite good, but this kind of article with many settings still needs to be read more to be enjoyable.