[Dual heroines] [1v1] [Main attack]
[Death Return] [Disguised Prophet] [Growth Type] [Later Invincible]
Lin Mian traveled through another world for eight years, always thinking that this was just an ordinary steam city-state.
Returning to the twenty-four hours before her death, she had a glimpse of the truth of the world.
This is a crazy world filled with forbidden magic and flesh and blood technology.
The friendly old man selling newspapers on the street is an aberration with compound eyes stitched together.
The roaring steam train, the furnace is burning with twisting flesh.
In the past, the world was not peaceful, but her spiritual vision was low and she was protected in honey.
The illusion of stability was shattered, and Shen Ci's disappearance was no accident.
It doesn't matter, the time-based T1 and the top information bits are about to come into play!
Death returns, start!
Reader comments
This is my first time writing a long review. T^TThe author's capital writing is very beautiful! ! Death returns and also incorporates a world view of mechanical punk on the surface but flesh-and-blood punk at the core. This setting is very novel. To be honest, I have read a lot of novels, but this setting really surprised me from the bottom of my heart. It is really rare to see such eye-catching works. I feel that the author has polished it seriously and with great care. Well, although the content of the novel is mainly about magic, I still look forward to the author's ability to integrate magic with the punk worldview, and look forward to the subsequent plot. (*'ε`*)
Regarding the content in the book, I actually have some questions and understandings that I would like to ask the boss:
1. It is a bit too hasty to assume that the protagonist has the ability to return to death when he dies for the first time. Because many settings have limits on the number of deaths. How the protagonist believes that he has the ability to infinite resurrection, I think it is not rigorous enough. Because this article mentioned that this is a kind of magic, can you introduce the protagonist's feelings about this ability? He is getting stronger when using the ability, so that he can use this ability without burden, which may be more reasonable.
2. The protagonist dies hundreds of times in one breath and returns to the first meeting. Although this is a better way to develop the plot, there is a problem in the middle. That is when the protagonist will go back to the time before Shen Ci disappeared, so why not save him at this time? However, I also prefer and wish to go back to the time when we first met, but it still feels a bit abrupt in the middle. Maybe we can add some plot to fix this bug.
The above is just my personal opinion and understanding. Maybe as an ordinary novel that people can read without thinking, my excessive rigor is indeed a bit of a fuss, and many people actually don't pay attention to it at all. The setting of the novel must be clearer to the author. I post this because I hope the author can write better and better. In fact, the writing of Boss is very good, and the growth of the protagonist is indeed visible to the naked eye. I like and value this work very much. If possible, I hope the author can continue writing it. I am looking forward to the day when the novel is finished. I will always be with the boss! >∧<
The author looks familiar🤔
You can see if the protagonist's inability to die is a reward or a punishment?
This is my first time writing a long review. T^TThe author's capital writing is very beautiful! ! Death returns and also incorporates a world view of mechanical punk on the surface but flesh-and-blood punk at the core. This setting is very novel. To be honest, I have read a lot of novels, but this setting really surprised me from the bottom of my heart. It is really rare to see such eye-catching works. I feel that the author has polished it seriously and with great care. Well, although the content of the novel is mainly about magic, I still look forward to the author's ability to integrate magic with the punk worldview, and look forward to the subsequent plot. (*'ε`*) Regarding the content in the book, I actually have some questions and understandings that I would like to ask the boss: 1. It is a bit too hasty to assume that the protagonist has the ability to return to death when he dies for the first time. Because many settings have limits on the number of deaths. How the protagonist believes that he has the ability to infinite resurrection, I think it is not rigorous enough. Because this article mentioned that this is a kind of magic, can you introduce the protagonist's feelings about this ability? He is getting stronger when using the ability, so that he can use this ability without burden, which may be more reasonable. 2. The protagonist dies hundreds of times in one breath and returns to the first meeting. Although this is a better way to develop the plot, there is a problem in the middle. That is when the protagonist will go back to the time before Shen Ci disappeared, so why not save him at this time? However, I also prefer and wish to go back to the time when we first met, but it still feels a bit abrupt in the middle. Maybe we can add some plot to fix this bug. The above is just my personal opinion and understanding. Maybe as an ordinary novel that people can read without thinking, my excessive rigor is indeed a bit of a fuss, and many people actually don't pay attention to it at all. The setting of the novel must be clearer to the author. I post this because I hope the author can write better and better. In fact, the writing of Boss is very good, and the growth of the protagonist is indeed visible to the naked eye. I like and value this work very much. If possible, I hope the author can continue writing it. I am looking forward to the day when the novel is finished. I will always be with the boss! >∧<
The author looks familiar🤔
You can see if the protagonist's inability to die is a reward or a punishment?
Two heroines, look forward to it
Not bad, nice looking