Trapped in a Game, Hunted by My Own Allies

The subject matter and content are quite interesting, but I didn't understand it a bit, and I felt that the expression was a bit jumpy (so to speak...). In short, it's not bad. It is my debut novel after all, so please bear with me.

Teacher! Look at this! Here!!! Oi! Oi! Oi! (Slaps belly) oi! Oi! Oi! (Slaps belly) oi! Oi! Oi! (Slaps belly) oi! Oi! Oi! (Slaps belly) oi! Oi! Oi! (Slaps belly) oi! Oi! Oi! (Slaps belly) Ahem, the novel is very interesting. I love you, teacher (♡˃̵ᴗ˂̵♡) Oh, go ahead, I dare say this is the best interstellar supernatural novel I have ever seen on Tomato. It's so good, why doesn't anyone read it? Is it just because the author is a level 1 author? Our Yingbao is also very awesome Klass.

It's good to watch, but there are a lot of Riddlers. I'm looking forward to the plot in the introduction [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more]

The writing is quite good and there is nothing wrong with the writing. Although it is a little jumpy, it does not affect reading. It has a certain reading threshold and is not particularly short and fast. I think it's quite good-looking. The author has explained everything he needs to explain and written everything. He trusts the readers more. I think there's nothing wrong with it. The writing style of "Connecting Nature" is quite good, but the number of chapters is currently relatively small, and I haven't written the introduction yet. I'm looking forward to it. It's very interesting, I hope there will be more chapters!

I read Chapter 8 first, and suddenly recalled Chapter 2. At first I thought I would summarize it in a few words, but ended up writing a whole chapter, which made me think it was a flashback to start writing about the protagonist's past school life. Chapter 3 suddenly returned to reality. I suggested that Chapter 2 be deleted and added to Chapter 1, and summarized in a few words. Many settings can be released in the later chapters. For example, the part where the protagonist buys medicine and injects can be mentioned later when he meets other awakened people. There should be more psychological activities in the plot where the protagonist meets Ilian, both the protagonist's and Ilian's. Their actions always give me a weird feeling. The protagonist took the elevator to the 13th floor. Everything was too fast. More details should be added. Was Illian's sudden disappearance because he was rescued? It might be mentioned later, but I didn't see it. I couldn't tell the protagonist's emotions from the beginning. I hope to add more psychological descriptions, and these three plots can be made longer. It looks like the male protagonist is rushing, and everything develops too fast.

Almost tied. . On the contrary, I was a little reluctant to finish reading it hehe. The setting and plot of each character are very interesting, and the setting of the protagonist is also very interesting. . I was very excited to watch the fighting-related plots. Oh my god, he is so handsome. 😭Looking forward to more storylines in the future. There are so many foreshadowings and I really want to see the follow-up background story of Ningfu soon. I wish to open my eyes and update the chapter to 10 (? The interaction with the protagonist group is also very interesting. I like every character in the novel... Everyone has their own characteristics. The language system is very low-level, but I still try my best to comment. If there are any inconsistencies, please ignore it... Anyway, please work hard and look forward to more plots and works in the future!

Needless to say, the teacher's writing is super good, the rhythm and plot are ups and downs, and it can really affect people's minds. I just don't understand why no one reads [what]

Hmm... The plot is quite interesting and a bit inexplicable, but it doesn't feel like a "player"...? Well, everyone knows the details of the protagonist. It's weird. It's okay as a new book.

OK is very good-looking. All the members' IQs are online. One star is deducted because I can't understand. There are too many riddlers.

The writing is awesome, but I feel like some things need to be foreshadowed and explained in detail. Come on.