
Entering the Game, You Are Constantly Being Chased by Friendly Forces.
穿进游戏,一直在被友军追杀
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 112k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Subgenre
- Gaming & Sports
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 14h ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
441Reads
182Shelves
52Chapters
49Listens
456Reads · all time





I read Chapter 8 first, and suddenly recalled Chapter 2. At first I thought I would summarize it in a few words, but ended up writing a whole chapter, which made me think it was a flashback to start writing about the protagonist's past school life. Chapter 3 suddenly returned to reality. I suggested that Chapter 2 be deleted and added to Chapter 1, and summarized in a few words. Many settings can be released in the later chapters. For example, the part where the protagonist buys medicine and injects can be mentioned later when he meets other awakened people. There should be more psychological activities in the plot where the protagonist meets Ilian, both the protagonist's and Ilian's. Their actions always give me a weird feeling. The protagonist took the elevator to the 13th floor. Everything was too fast. More details should be added. Was Illian's sudden disappearance because he was rescued? It might be mentioned later, but I didn't see it. I couldn't tell the protagonist's emotions from the beginning. I hope to add more psychological descriptions, and these three plots can be made longer. It looks like the male protagonist is rushing, and everything develops too fast.
Good looking, good luck to the author
It's good to watch, but there are a lot of Riddlers. I'm looking forward to the plot in the introduction [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more]