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Friends, do you still remember the story of the Blue Sea? Oh, I forgot. This is a wonderful story about a cube man named Equation who was sent into the world of the blue sea by a mysterious force with his friends. Let's see if Equation can use his wonderful tools to create stories in daily life.
Reader comments
This book is well written and well integrated, but the original MC version is a bit lacking, so some people may not like it. What I am not very satisfied with is that the original love line is not fully developed, and the production capacity is too low. For example, the few sentences that Kohei said were changed to the original version. If you watch it this way, the look and feel will be better because the original love line has been written perfectly. If you change it casually, it will easily be very discouraging. At present, this can be regarded as a relatively big poisonous point. The original work only has Aina's inner changes at the end, which is a bit sloppy. The author can write this in more detail. The love line in the original version can be moved as much as possible. The plot can be changed, but the love line should be kept as low as possible. If the author wants to write an emotional line, I suggest writing it on the supporting characters. The original protagonist group, the emotional line must not be touched. I hope the author can write better in the future, come on!
Come on, author! Don't tear apart the original CP.
It's nice to look at, but the properties of the blocks don't exist at all. I'll come back and take a look when you come out with a set of abilities for the protagonist.
Not bad, the male protagonist blended into the Blue Sea style very smoothly
Author, author, is there a heroine?
It seemed like I wanted to change the love line earlier, but I changed it back, which I think is good. It can be said that this work is getting better and better. Except that the current emotional line of the protagonist is not subtle enough and does not match the attributes of a cube man, and more like a person with some MC abilities, there are basically no problems. I hope the author will write better and better in the future. As long as he keeps updating, I will keep reading.
Pretty good video.
Okay, okay, I personally like this kind of daily plot. I am looking forward to whether the square people will build a house in the uninhabited island plot later [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Please update]
I hope the heroine is a drunkard
The subject matter is great and the plot is also very good, but it's a pity that it was released too late! ! ! Only two chapters a day
This book is well written and well integrated, but the original MC version is a bit lacking, so some people may not like it. What I am not very satisfied with is that the original love line is not fully developed, and the production capacity is too low. For example, the few sentences that Kohei said were changed to the original version. If you watch it this way, the look and feel will be better because the original love line has been written perfectly. If you change it casually, it will easily be very discouraging. At present, this can be regarded as a relatively big poisonous point. The original work only has Aina's inner changes at the end, which is a bit sloppy. The author can write this in more detail. The love line in the original version can be moved as much as possible. The plot can be changed, but the love line should be kept as low as possible. If the author wants to write an emotional line, I suggest writing it on the supporting characters. The original protagonist group, the emotional line must not be touched. I hope the author can write better in the future, come on!
Come on, author! Don't tear apart the original CP.
It's nice to look at, but the properties of the blocks don't exist at all. I'll come back and take a look when you come out with a set of abilities for the protagonist.
Not bad, the male protagonist blended into the Blue Sea style very smoothly
Author, author, is there a heroine?
It seemed like I wanted to change the love line earlier, but I changed it back, which I think is good. It can be said that this work is getting better and better. Except that the current emotional line of the protagonist is not subtle enough and does not match the attributes of a cube man, and more like a person with some MC abilities, there are basically no problems. I hope the author will write better and better in the future. As long as he keeps updating, I will keep reading.
Pretty good video.
Okay, okay, I personally like this kind of daily plot. I am looking forward to whether the square people will build a house in the uninhabited island plot later [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Please update]
I hope the heroine is a drunkard
The subject matter is great and the plot is also very good, but it's a pity that it was released too late! ! ! Only two chapters a day