What? You’re Only Telling Me She’s a Woman After I Took Over Her Body?

The first thirty or so chapters were quite interesting, but after that I kept investigating and having conversations, repeatedly emphasizing the handover of control between the male and female protagonists. It was like watching the daily life of a company, and the writing in the back was very complicated and tiring to read. I saw that there was no reasoning tag in the tags. In terms of plot, I think the highest score is 2 stars. The reason why I gave it 5 stars is that I think the dialogue between the male and female protagonists in this book is interesting and to my liking. Good luck to the author.

The subject matter is very novel, but it is still recommended not to use AI even if it is spoken in vernacular. Whether it is a comic or a novel, once AI is used, it feels very human-machine, and over-modification makes the novel look very complicated. This should be the result of excessive expansion and modification of AI, which makes readers very tired. Words such as "steady, rules" in the comic adapted by Hongguo AI are not repeated by humans, and other environment descriptions Classes can use AI, but dialogue must not be manipulated by AI. Didn't you realize that the dialogue in your novel is not the words that humans use in daily communication? Once or twice is profound, and if it is too many, it is mechanical or even inexplicable. If you can't read it once or twice, it will be difficult to substitute. Or you can change the AI software or train the AI again, so that the language organized by the AI is as close to the common language of humans as possible.

Plot dialogue between two souls, dialogue box chat and suspense reasoning

It's pretty good. The author's writing style is indeed pretty good and he has his own unique style, but it's just a bit too forceful, as if it's deliberate or showing off skills. Regarding the dialogue between the characters, a reader in the comment area said it very well. It really feels like a storm, and specific plots in just a few chapters will become eye-catching. If there are too many, and everyone has this style, it will appear homogeneous, and it will become more difficult and boring to write. It is not that the writing is not good, but it affects the reading experience. In other words, this writing method is not suitable for a website with a "fast-moving" writing style like Western Persimmon. Of course, the book is still worth reading 👍

So far it looks okay, but it lacks a bit of agility. I feel that everyone's words are too rational, their words are a little artificial, and they lack some emotion and style. It doesn't reflect the differences in personality and style between people, they all look the same.

The subject matter is really novel, and the author's skills are pretty good, so I can get into it.

I've read Chapter 14 so far, and so far I've written pretty well. Maybe there are some young people on Duo She's side, but after Duo She faced the confrontation with the original owner's acquaintances, the details of the test were handled very well. It is completely different from other time-travelers whose acquaintances just lost their memory, and their temperament changed drastically, so they just accepted it by fooling around. To be honest, people around me generally agree that although it is easy to write, I still feel a little tired after reading too much. After so long, I have only read very few novels and anime. People around me have realized that the time traveler is not my own. And I haven't seen many of them that handle the details of the battle of wits very well. If there are other authors who have followed this path that I have not seen, please recommend such novels to me. Thanks!

At best, it's quite detailed; at worst, it's Luo Li Ba Suo, not an invincible novel.

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's love for Diao Chan Fighting with Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai is really too strong Well, if it weren't for the Nuoshou with an outer ring and the Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold fire would kill him. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain, "Young man, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang. The indignation against the monkey who was beaten to death with three sticks. In short, the story of this book The plot is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, and the fighting scenes feel like you are there The setting and character descriptions are spot on! One more thing is to update with AI as soon as possible!!!

It's not bad if you read it as a suspense novel [Chigua] Uh-huh, all the processes are written down in detail, it looks so tiring [Petrochemical], proceed with caution.