Entry: Cultivation of Immortality: How Tao Ancestor Was Trained

Give me full marks. The settings are reasonable and the narrative is natural and smooth. Focus on expressing the elegance and naturalness of the fairy, without forcing the show to slap in the face. It's a good fairy tale.

I finally found one that I can read. It's about cultivating immortals. The others are either brainless, eunuchs, or the AI ​​writing is too heavy, with a lot of typos. This one is a little short of 210,000 words.

So far, I feel pretty good after reading Chapter 71... A little bit toxic but not harmful. To put it simply, there is no mess, and the most important thing is that you are really cultivating immortality instead of looking for women every two days... There is currently no heroine, and I hope it will be the same in the future. It would be better if he could always be a casual cultivator. After all, the protagonist's golden finger does not need to join the sect.

The writing is really good, it is a steady cultivation of immortality, the cheats are not so mindless and invincible, the plot is reasonable, Gou Daoliu's masterpiece, you need to be patient, the foundation has been established, but I don't know when I can get the second entry in the century.

It's well written, but there is an early chapter, which seems to be no longer suitable for old bookworms like me. The early period itself is not bad, but as I read more and more, it leads to too much being the same. In addition, this book is more traditional, and it feels like it is from the later period. The early period feels similar to most immortality novels. It is suitable for beginners, or people who don't often read the immortality genre. It is well written, but it is really well written.

I feel that the description of the magic techniques is not very realistic. At present, it is more focused on the process of cultivation. The new entry of Gold Finger is estimated to be 180 chapters later (this is annoying, after all, I saw two or three directly in the introduction, and I couldn't come out after waiting for a long time [face covering]). The overall impression is good, but Gold Finger is a bit uncomfortable (if Gold Finger is the purple energy enlightenment, it will probably be more towards the mortal flow, there will be no such gap)

Okay, very good👌🏻The world view is well structured and there is no plot breakdown at the moment.

Yes, the author has sufficient knowledge in writing and writing. I transferred it to Tomato from a certain platform.

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There are so few people reading this book that I feel like I will be cut off soon.