The Untamed: The Whole Immortal Sect Begs Me Not to Love Jin Guangyao

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Speaking of Meng Yao, everyone knows Jin Guangyao in the original work, but here, Jiang Qianyu handed him a mental spell when he was at his most embarrassed, saying that we would meet at the top. Just with these words, I broke the defense directly. [Fear]😢😢 She gave him a little warmth when no one else regarded him as a human being. This sense of redemption was so touching. Yu Ziyuan's line was particularly well written. This character was quite frustrating in the original book, but this book slowly softened her up. Jiang Yanli has also grown up very naturally, from being soft-tempered to being able to work hard. You can see that this family is slowly getting warmer. The writing is smooth and not verbose, and the pace is comfortable. The first few chapters may be a little bit dense, but once you get through it, it gets better and better. If you are a fan of "Chen Qing Ling" or if you like the heroine to use her brains to pursue a career, this book is definitely worth reading! Urgent update!!!!!!

Hi there, dear readers! I am the author Chunshan Banzui~ Thank you for clicking this book and willing to give your time to Ayu and Ayao, and to this imperfect story. Bow first! My writing power is limited, so many places may not be good enough. The rhythm is unstable, the details cannot withstand scrutiny, and the characters are OOC, so please give it a pat. If you feel like "something's not right here" while watching it, it's all my fault and has nothing to do with the characters. They are all very good to me. Ayao suffered too much in the book, and I want to give him a beam of light. Ayu is that light. But as I write and write, I realize that it's not easy to be a celebrity. I have to save this and that, and I have to find time to quarrel with Jin Guangshan (laughs). Sometimes I feel that Ayu is much braver than me. She dares to rush forward, but I will only hide behind the keyboard. The writing of this book depends entirely on you. Every comment, every "update reminder", every free gift (crazy hint. Gif) is my life-sustaining pill! Real! Seeing that someone likes the interaction between Ayu and Ayao, I can twist in my chair and be happy for a long time. So if you think it's not bad, please give me a "good review". My kid is going crazy trying to get recommended~ If you feel something is wrong, please tell me gently! I will secretly write it down and download it (if there is one) to strive for progress. But if you just want to read it quietly, without talking or rating, then thank you. I can feel the traces of your quiet presence through the screen. I love you Chunshan Half Drunk ❤️ (P. S. Free gifts are free! Click once and you won't lose! Click twice to earn blood!) I got five-star reviews and some free gifts. Even if I stayed up late, I would code like crazy! The more you push me, the harder I write. Your support is my life-saver~ 🥺✨

The pace of the novel is steady, and it is not the anxious mode where I want to save the characters in the book, such as finding Wei Ying in the first chapter, rescuing Xue Yang in the second chapter, and rescuing Meng Yao in the third chapter. But from the perspective of Miss Jiang San, it is reasonable and karmic, and she meets different characters. Moreover, the book does not describe the character's psychological state in a large space, and only uses actions and expressions to reflect the character's heart. One thing the original protagonist is better than the time traveler is that he doesn't make lengthy comments about the characters in the book, and whitewash the characters he likes (for example, Xue Yang's little finger was crushed and no one helped him, so he later massacred the whole family and people of the Immortal Family. He is pitiful and hateful at the same time, and it is impossible to say that the lives of his men deserve to die just because he is pitiful.) The original protagonist's evaluation of the characters in the book is mainly based on the character's current behavior, which is generated during the interaction between the two parties. Seeing this, it can be said that this is a serious fan fiction. The author's big hand only pushes it gently, without holding the puppets, and the plot develops naturally.

What moved me most about this book was that it described the warmth of home. Jiang Qianyu fell into a pit at the age of eight and received a prophecy. She was not frightened, but she wanted to change the tragedy. Her most sassy scene was on the Jinlin Stage, where the half-grown girl shocked Jin Guangshan to the point where she couldn't get off the stage in front of a room full of guests, just to protect Meng Yao, whom she had never met before. The phrase "meeting at the top" is crisp and clear. But what really makes people feel soft are the changes in Lotus Pier. Yu Ziyuan went from being cold-faced to now accepting Mrs. Jiang, Jiang Fengmian silently peeled off lotus seeds and pushed them over, Jiang Yanli stood aside and handed the steps to his parents... These details are so life-like. There is no "I love you" sentence, but after reading it, you will know that this family loves deeply. It is difficult to write a novel because the characters are all familiar to readers, but the author used the variable Jiang Qianyu to string together a game of chess and write about a family from indifference to reunion. After reading this, you will feel: It turns out that some tragedies do not need to happen, as long as you are willing to extend your hand.

I have read the third book of my wife. It's great to write fan fiction. I originally came here for Jin Guangyao, but I jumped in and couldn't get out. 😫 I was confused at the beginning. My wife is very good at writing daily life dramas. Yu Ziyuan finally got someone to call her Mrs. Jiang. The interaction between Jiang Cheng and Wei Wuxian made me angry and happy [smirking] Jin Zixun is that naughty kid. I get angry when I see him [rolls eyes] But as soon as Meng Yao appeared, I felt better. I felt so sorry for him. The part where the lotus lantern is recognized as the owner is also very funny hahaha, the pace is very fast, there is no suspicion of hydrology or AI polishing, it feels like it is purely hand-rubbed, come on, madam It looks good, keep up the good work

The author's writing style is very good. I really like the interaction between the male and female protagonists. The emotions are very delicate and the plot is also very interesting. The most important thing is that it is not OOC at all. Everyone should read this book! Can the author update 800 chapters a day for me to see? I will keep following up!

It is so well written that I dare not read the original book again because it will make me uncomfortable. A few years have passed, and I have almost forgotten about it. I accidentally saw the same person, and everyone came back to life. Finally, it has a different ending [Blowing Kisses] Keep updating!! So pretty!

This is the first time I have read a novel about magic written from the perspective of a new character, and I was caught off guard. I have never read this kind of novel before. Firstly, I am afraid that the character design will be ruined, and secondly, I am afraid that the substitution will feel unreasonable. After reading the whole article, I couldn't wait to write a paragraph review. I feel that the whole story is very stable, there are no sudden emotional ties, and from the perspective of new characters, I think it is really well written. It does not criticize a certain character in the book from above, but follows the development of the big plot. There is no single negative character, everyone is living in this world with flesh and blood. I think the author writes about family and emotions very delicately. I like the description of family relationships in the article very much. It feels warm and not obtrusive at all. Compared to a fan fiction, I feel that the character design is not o o c at all and the writing style of the whole article is very good. The plot is laid out and promoted very comfortably. It does not make others think that the fan fiction and the novel have too much origin. For a novel, I think the author's emotional and family lines are worth reading. I like some words in someone's book, like the characters really come to life. I like a few lines in the article. I feel like I can hear the echo of fate in each line. For a novel like this, I hope it can become a big hit and be seen by more people.

Jin Guangyao in the original book is really a pitiful and hateful villain, but in this book, the heroine's baby becomes a beam of light in his life, giving him a pair of lovely children and a happy ending, which makes people's hearts warm.