Arknights: Is My City Still Humane?

It looks great, please stick to the group portraits. In my opinion, the protagonist should be urban and Terran beings. I don't want the original protagonist to take up too much space. The character does not seem to be OOC at the moment. Please keep it up.

The writing is very good, combining the city and Terra, the multi-faceted description vividly reflects the sense of chaos, and the details of the battle and the characters' personalities are well grasped. It's more like a group portrait than a single protagonist. The protagonist Lu Yang is more like a passerby and a witness. The setting is characteristic of retirement, Tian Guxing. All in all, this is a new monthly fan book with great potential. As for the negative aspect, does it count as having too few protagonists? Author, you did a great job with the changes! The pace is no longer sluggish, and the characters are more distinct. I used to think that the subsequent development was weird, but now I have the idea to continue watching it. I finished reading it in one go and am looking forward to the follow-up development. I am very curious about how to reflect the personality coverage of the sinners, or whether it is just the initial personality. Anyway, cheers to the author.

A very distinctive group portrait. There is no random use of the God's perspective to destroy the immersion, and the ruthless and strange corner of the city is described with restraint from the local perspective of Terra. It's just that the first few chapters are too restrained, making people completely confused about the situation. Many setting details are not explained, and too simple perspective jumps will make readers lose their sense of the plot.

Good-looking, the "people-oriented" of the city mixed with the darkness of Terra

I finally found a new novel when I ran out of novels to read. After reading it for a while, I felt that this novel was the type that I could read. Originally, I'm a diver and don't like to comment, but I really want to complain. Starting from the second chapter, I describe why Amiya has black hair and a black ring? Amiya has brown hair and a blue ring, and then why do Virgilius have white hair in Chapter 6? Charon has white hair, while Virgilius has dark gray except for his eyes and skin. I haven't read it yet and I don't know if the author has made any changes, but now I feel prickly all over. I forgot to add: Because I haven't read the back yet and I don't know whether the author intentionally wrote it this way or if it was a mistake, so I am telling you my thoughts on the chapters I have read now. I'll have to keep seeing what happens next. I feel like there are too many words in the description and it's a bit procrastinating. After listening to the book for a long time, I just described it in detail in a few paragraphs. My mind was confused and I couldn't finish watching it. There were a lot of switching perspectives and flashbacks. I couldn't remember the content in a short period of time. By the end, I couldn't remember how everyone was scattered everywhere. Come on, author! Although my brain seems to have lost my ability to read it, except for some of the problems I mentioned before, the article is generally good.

Has the protagonist been changed from the leader to the finisher? Does that mean the introduction needs to be changed?

Urbanites should be considered pure-blooded humans, right?

It's quite good, and it updates quickly. Unfortunately, this subject is relatively unpopular, and almost no one reads it. I hope the author won't stop updating it. After all, I feel that many books are discontinued after updating dozens of chapters. I think it's good. I suggest you recommend it more. There aren't many that you can read in this monthly book. This one is pretty good. Don't overwhelm me with it.

It is very well written and profoundly shows the ruthless social order in the city, which is perfectly integrated with the Ark worldview.

Keep writing, brother, I beg you If there are bottlenecks in the future, it's okay to update once a week or every two weeks. Don't stop updating just because there are few people watching 😢 I don't want to watch those monthly defenses at 9 o'clock. What will we eat if you run away 😢