The Sharingan in Genshin Impact

Writing is not easy, so I give it four stars. I was confused from the beginning. The protagonist looked up and saw the bridge in Mondstadt. I think no matter how many people the Mondstadt Knights had lying at the city gate, they wouldn't be able to see them coming and going. Generally, other authors write that it is still far away from Mondstadt and enlarge the map many times. After the protagonist becomes conscious and obtains gold socialism, he still has to walk for half a day or an hour or two to reach Mondstadt. Because this is in line with the law that no one notices the protagonist lying there for a long time. But in this book, the protagonist has been lying there for a long time, still lying at the gate of Mondstadt, and no one noticed it. If the Knights continue to recruit, at least there will still be a few more reliable ones. Not to mention running around, Amber. Didn't the elusive Diluc and Kaia also notice it? And there's Kelly running around. No one noticed the protagonist lying at the gate of the city for a long time. It can't be that the power of the system has exploded and blurred everyone's perception.

The paragraphs are long, there are many adjectives, and it's full of hooks. Classic Naruto, pirate skills, and no desire to read anymore.

It looks okay, but it's just too little.

Very well written.

Multiple heroines or single?