One Person: Starting from the Lu Family's Birthday Party, Jiuliumen Was Promoted

It's a pity that it doesn't reflect the philosophy of Yanyun Sect. In one person's terms, it has form but no spirit, cultivating life but not cultivating nature.

I saw this book for the first time on Tomato, a fan book written by Pickled Fish and One Person. It has flaws and flaws. If the author updates more than 70 chapters a day, I would give it five stars.

I don't know if it's because I've played in the tavern too much, but I always feel like it smells like AI. I replied to the author and found out that it was marked as four stars.

Okay, but not enough

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Very few people write about Yan Yun

I'm here to give you a good review

Looks good, come on, come on (ᐡ⦁⩊⦁⸝⸝ᐡ )₊୭

Will there be drunken flowers? [Laughing]

It's okay, but this is the first time I saw one that wrote about Yan Yun's martial arts in other worlds. I gave it five stars, but why don't you use Qinggong to show off your coolness?

Pretty good haha

So far it looks pretty good to me.

It's good. After all, there are very few novels about Yanyun martial arts.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

The plot is reasonable, the rhythm is tight, and the combat is exciting

It's pretty good. There are no big problems with the plot, but the updates are too slow.

It feels okay. The author did listen to his advice and the writing is pretty good so far.

Well written, I like it[OK][OK][OK]