HP: Is Skyfall on Nurmengard Correct?

Come on, Laoji (Because it is relatively daily (maybe not too daily), the overall rhythm of the article may not be very good. You can read it as appropriate. Also, I still need to improve the character creation. Generally speaking, this article can be regarded as an article to read casually when you are free.)

Overall it's very good, a breath of fresh air among tomatoes? It doesn't have a strong setting and macro ideals with strong combat power, but it is not a brainless protagonist, Tuan Nanny Yuan Meng. As the protagonist of the original work, Harry has not lost his growth and self. Overall, I did not see any stereotypes or OOC about the character. It can be seen that the author has his own understanding of the character. The portrayal of the two protagonists gave me a very full feeling. Each has its own advantages, disadvantages and personality. In my eyes, they feel very real. They are two normal ordinary people. They will have conflicts due to disagreements, be silly and joke around, and will not get perfect scores in all subjects after only taking a month of courses. Their images are ordinary and three-dimensional. At the same time, the main story narrative will not be boring. I guess there may be some explanations about time travel in the later stage? There are a lot of doubts left and we can make bold guesses. Overall, it is a very heartwarming story that is not boring. The author's writing style is also pretty good, and it feels like reading a storybook. The only fly in the ointment is that the author seems to be a new writer () and may have problems with stiff writing and abrupt sentences in the early stage, and the rhythm control seems to be slightly poor. However, with the progress in the later stage, these shortcomings are eliminated, and it is still worth watching. I hope the author can continue writing without affecting his studies. [Already planted][Bookshelf plus one]

Wondering if Theo and Severit are really just good friends? It feels like the atmosphere between the two is not like ordinary brothers, but more like an old married couple [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Super delicious juice! The plot and characterization are both great and the logic is sound, so I'll appreciate it carefully.

It's very interesting. I finally found what I like to read. The author must update it. Come on.

Super, super good-looking, very good-looking, extremely good-looking.

So, are these two protagonists CPs? ! ? [Anger]

Finally I found a new book. .

Come on, author! The writing is really good, the writing style is also very good, the plot is also very good, the concept is also very good, and the key points are not too OOC.

It looks good, but there are too few. Looking forward to the update!

It's nice, but it's not finished yet.

It's nice to read, and the writing is good.

Super super super super super beautiful